Reviews for Harry Potter and The League of Shadows: Rewritten
Guest chapter 12 . 12/25/2014
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ethancameron20 chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
I find it interesting to find the fact that I feel as if I have read this fic before. Oh wait. I have. Large sections of this have been taken from the fic "The Son of Lord Voldemort". So I'd like to know why you're taking some other person fic. Thank you.
AgorasDarkfire chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
I must say that you're a really good writer but ill be honest with you. Your naming skills suck! Sorry to put it so bluntly but you really overuse that whole twilight thing. Twilight magest and Phoenix sure . But come on! Twilight dragons, twilight robes, twilight armor, twilight cape ( by the way dragons don't have fur)-its really overkill. Same for atlantian, you don't even have to use that word, just twilight is completely enough. And that necklace called the twelve diamonds of antlantis is completely uneseceary . You could just say it was a beautiful necklace with twelve diamonds it doesn't have to be called anything if you can' make up a good name.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/10/2014
Um the correct spelling for potions I'd potions
Lennart66 chapter 12 . 5/22/2014
aww sooo good please continue 33333
Fr0stRa1n chapter 12 . 5/11/2014
update please!
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 4 . 4/19/2014
and this is where i stop, unfortunately.. i've never been a fan of stories where Harry gets a bucketful of inheritances and magical power ups. it says 'gradually powerful', but.. well, it's really up to personal opinion what people think about the word 'gradual', but this is definitely insn't the definition of the word as far as i'm concerned.

it's a shame to drop this, but not a huge loss overall. HP/DG is popular enough that you can find new ones fairly easily. here is few reviews for your troubles anyway, ciao.
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
well, hopefully you aren't implying that Harry (i will call him that) will become enemies with Tom. i mean, the way you emphasized how he was unnerved by the green eyes of Harry.. well, maybe i'm just overreacting, but that's the initial feeling i got from it.

this is a refreshingly unique set-up that is a dying breed nowadays.
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
when you have either Daphne or Fleur as a main pairing, i can hardly resist.. and with both of them.. i'm totally sold. now i just have to assume that you wouldn't have continued to write such long chapters with poor grammar.. at least not without people telling you about it. well, just gotta wait and see. summary was interesting, even without the part about HP/DG/FD, so i would have at least checked this out anyway.
Lone wolf aka Black Hawk Omega chapter 3 . 4/9/2014
Awesome
Penny is wise chapter 12 . 3/2/2014
Awesome chapter.
ImTheOneWhoReads chapter 10 . 2/25/2014
Just an FYI, Blaise Zambini is a guy. No offence or anything. I love your story though.
Pheonixs1518 chapter 12 . 2/24/2014
could be fleur since apoline is always in britian o-o. Also pottermore or w/e that site is has a list of all the school people's name by houses o-o.
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 12 . 2/23/2014
Update soon please
ob1292 chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
Your best resource for information would be to Google it like "Harry Potter list of characters" and go from there.
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