|Reviews for Harry Potter and The League of Shadows: Rewritten|
| Blood Clover chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Quote: There are drastic changes in the plot, characters and personalities of the Characters of this story to make the story more realistic and better.
Heh. Let's not kid ourselves here. The reason there are drastic changes in this story is cause your previous version was plaguerized from Shopaholic's 'Son of Voldemort'. Hope this one is more original, but I can't bring myself to bother trying. Sorry.
| Luna Lily Severus Allen Snape chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
I like it
| Sculptor chapter 12 . 4/17/2013
The only one I can think of is the girl is Blaise, she and Tracey are the only ones who are that type but Blaise is more flirty. I want the final pairing to include Blaise too. I never read a vampire Blaise before and it is pretty cool. I hope the final pairing is Harry/Daphne/Fleur/Tracey/Blaise. Too many girls? So what? he can afford it and it will be for stronger alliance between the houses.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| TheDarkMind10 chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
I would like to point out that getting 20 percent monthly interest is basically impossible for any bank, even magical ones, to accommodate. In the real world, 2.5 percent annually is decent, and if he is a goblin friend, considering a goblin's dislike of an average witch/wizard, 4 percent annually would be about right. A normal witch or wizard would probably get about 1.5 percent annually.
| DarkShura chapter 12 . 4/15/2013
Great story. Thanks for writing.
| 221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 10 . 4/14/2013
For Ch. 12, could the girl be Fleur?
| 221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
Wow, cliffhanger! Is the girl Rose? Or is Perenelle Flamel testing him? (I solemnly hope that this is the fic with the Flamels...otherwise this will be awkward) Who Knows? (Well, you do!) Great chapter!
| flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
| hotkillerz chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
idc whon the girl is,but the girl should be his g/f just to piss daph off.
| Ana Julia Jackson chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
| lordblink chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
Well, the story is developing smoothly. I did mention in it a previous review, but I am assuming that you might have missed it. You have the word potion spelled as portion. You might want to do some editing, and fix that. Also, I am wondering, are you going to have Blaze tied to Harry as well? I know that you have it stated that Daphney and Fleur are the love interests, but if you thought about it, you could include Blaze, and that might tie the lord of the vampires to Harry. Keep up the great work, you're doing a wonderful job!
| qwerty885 chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
| maesde chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
Great, now update quickly and reveal who the chick is!
| god of all chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story .
| xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 11 . 4/10/2013
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.