|Reviews for Big City White Boys|
| GOLDEN WINGS chapter 23 . 11/9
Woah dude deep. I liked it please keep on updating. I truly Wana know what happens next U rule dude.
| salapa chapter 16 . 10/12
So I was flipping through the chapters to find the last one and I read and happened upon this chapter/explanation and even though this was probably written a few months ago... Well, I really like that you explained why sometimes updating consistently isn't possible and I totally respect you for still finding time to pursue your writing hobby (and in turn give your fellow fans life energy through this story lol). I hope things in your life work themselves out, you seem like a very stand up person. Anyway, I also wanted to mention that I think your writing is excellent and I look forward to reading future chapters, whenever they may be shared.
| Supergoddad chapter 23 . 9/26
So that's what happened.. I'm sorry to not have reviewed earlier, I was kind of in a daze the last few days. I feel like I have gotten everywhere and nowhere in that daze. It wasn't pretty. I digress, it's good to read more of you. I'll try my best to stay with the updates. I'll see you on the next update.
| Katsumara chapter 23 . 9/24
Great chapter here. Missed this story tons and good to see it back again!
| Sapphiric chapter 20 . 9/24
I don't HOW I've never read this before. Oh my Spirits and now I think I'm going crazy. It's Chapter Twenty. I think my eyeballs are about to fall off. But I'm gonna keep on going anyway. Hehe.
Anyways, you're really awesome and I love this story so much I think I'm going to burst! *squeals girlishly* Keep going or I'll die. Quite literally.
| OpenYorEyes chapter 23 . 9/20
Great chapter I loved it I hope you update soon
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/19
Huh, guess it's my lucky day! New chapter a couple hours after I reviewed it!
Of course, I love the kataang moments. Just any of them. Unlike other stories, you kinda had to wait a bit before it was more than just flirting, like them actually being together. I like the build-up though. Keeps us waiting on the edge of our seats before readers get what they've wanted.
I do like the character development, and it shows in this chapter. With Katara, she equates love and comfort to giving up her body to someone, as it started with Jet. Now with Aang, its an entirely different...process, I guess? Maybe its set up so Aang shows her there's more to love than just that? Iunno, maybe I'm looking into this too deeply. Basically, I like how the characters are progressing. I feel like the story captures this stage in life really well. The drama/angst of college life along with one's love life. Am I going too deep with this review? Basically, really like the story, glad you've updated it once again, will be waiting for your next chapter in either story.
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/19
Not sure if you're going to continue this, but I guess this will serve as a review for the whole story. I really like what you've written so far. I normally don't read AUs, but I really like this one. And the other one you've written as well. I feel like the characters pop to life with how you've written them (dialogue/reactions to situations/etc.), and I really like that. Not to forget just...I guess the vividness/imagery/details in each chapter? In this chapter, you really capture the moment. The sunrise, the cold morning, and then having the two of them together...I dunno, I just really like your style of writing and this story. I look forward to reading more from you, either this story, or "Forfeits, Fears, and Demigods".
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/3
| Supergoddad chapter 22 . 3/22
Great chapter! I can't wait to see the outcome of the next chapter.
| Supergoddad chapter 22 . 2/28
I would love to read what happens next. Excellent story, nothing else.
| child who is cool chapter 22 . 12/9/2014
| child who is cool chapter 21 . 12/8/2014
| Guest chapter 22 . 11/29/2014
Great new chapter! I love this story!
| Audr3ygyakusetsu chapter 22 . 12/1/2014
Why'd you stop :- ... You better be updating soon.