Reviews for New Beginning
Deadlycake chapter 5 . 9/23/2016
More please
Guest chapter 5 . 3/19/2016
Oi it's been almost 4 years. You cannot just leave your readers with a cliffy and leave for FOUR YEARS. Update plz
Guest chapter 5 . 12/23/2015
well the idea and the story is great but asami's attitude is too much of a child like in my opinion cause when i think of asami he is the kind of man that is already very matured since childhood but any ways i like it and im waiting for the next chapter i really hope you finish this one:3
Maya.D.L chapter 5 . 8/8/2015
An interesting and unique story. It's a vertical reality almost, thank you for writing something so interesting
Seira chin chapter 5 . 2/13/2015
OMG! I want more now ! it's so catching this story love it ! *ahem* sorry , need to calm down ... sooooo please update ! can't wait
ArchangelAmvs chapter 5 . 5/23/2014
this is awesome are you planning on continuing it? please say yes I have to know what happens next!
Absalon95 chapter 5 . 12/8/2013
whats gonna happened next?!
don't just leave me hanging, I want to know what will happened next!
pretty please!
Nooooo chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
I need more please!
finderlov chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
i hope you make more chapters it was good keep it up please
finderlov chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
yes keep it up it is very good
innocenteyes chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
Omg ! I loved it pweeezz update I want more !(•Δ•)
anoko.seiran chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Nice beginning can't wait to see what's next.
tellymomo chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
Awesome but I need more please!
Crystal Yuzuki chapter 5 . 4/20/2013
O.O Update soon!
skadalex chapter 5 . 12/4/2012
You updated! It’s getting very exciting!
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