Reviews for The exiles return
aliquisbird1 chapter 3 . 12/9/2014
nice story so far only on chap threeew but i must say you. are. amazing. at. writing. this. love your stuff! :)
TheChickWithTheAwesomeUsername chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
Woah, woah!
This is going 100 miles per hour, SLOW THE CRAP DOWN!,
Da Eragon Masta chapter 10 . 1/3/2014
This was so dumb.
Da Eragon Masta chapter 4 . 1/3/2014
Alright, two things:

Better Grammar

Make Eragon awesome too!
DR.DavidMR-sonofChaos chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
great story
rampakslue0 chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
This story is kindof all over the place. Although the plot is good, as i said, it's all over the place. Have you thought about getting a beta?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Um sorry this is just not my style. Sorry.
Child of Kronos chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Why were Poseidon and his children exiled? It makes no sense. Was Zeus the one who exiled them? But Zeus seemed to care about Percy, especially since he gave him his blessings.
ArthurShade chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
Kaldi97 chapter 8 . 12/2/2012
PJandLGequalsLove chapter 8 . 12/1/2012
that last comment was me
Guest chapter 8 . 12/1/2012
yes please do a sequel this story was awesome
JayneParker chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
It is a little confusing. Could you try and slow it down a little. That would be nice. Good story though
nephilim209 chapter 8 . 11/24/2012
Dude, love the story so far! If u don't mind some constructive criticism, then try 2 go into a bit more detail with everything, and cut back on the run-on sentences. Other tha that, no complaints. And AWESOME ide with sly cooper thing! Keep it up man,(unless ur a chick, in which case, no offense) ur doing great!
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