Reviews for Punishment Marriage
girl.az2001 chapter 19 . 2/15
me encanto me hubiera gustado ver al bebe nacer y me hubiera gustado que fueran trillizon dos varones y una nena
LOVE3 chapter 1 . 1/17
I don't mean to be picky but...
Your writing is all over the place. As I read on, the format bunches up. What I mean is how you had your first chapter nicely set up, then by chapter 19, everything is just a blob.
There were grammar errors all over the place. There were just too many to give examples of.
Most of the time, I'm just confused at what you're trying write. I tried to read it all, but I couldn't take it anymore. I skipped around because I couldn't take the word vomit anymore.
All in all, I recommend getting a beta.
BUT it's still a nice story. It has potential.
tigeressallana chapter 9 . 2/21/2014
this story is awsome! i love your way of creating a story!
Ally97 chapter 19 . 8/28/2013
Loved it...it actually made me cry twice
xxrxuxsxtxyx chapter 19 . 5/27/2013
This was entirely awesome you have to put in an epilogue please
FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 16 . 3/17/2013
Well I am not going to kill the author. Their have been some things about this story that have bothered me. Mostly that I felt you made Karin too powerful. And despite this, it has been a decent enough story to overcome this. As to the character dying, I do understand that it had to happen. You needed it to keep the couple close to each other in apparent age.
dillon chapter 15 . 1/25/2013
i like it
Glo15Bug chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
Is Kaze male or female? One paragraph you'll be referring it Kaze as 'she' or 'her' and then in the next Kaze will be 'he' and 'him'... I really like this story, though the characters are extremely OOC...
Oh and I also hate Hinnamori... I'm ashamed to admit I smirked when Hitsugaya stabbed her, however, I didn't see her Zanpakto as a part of her, so I just thought Tiobome was adorable...
AnimeXMangaAddict chapter 9 . 11/12/2012
Hahaha! I find Renji and Ichigo really amusing! :) Tweddle- dede and tweedle-dum is totally fitting!
TheAnimeZankyou chapter 19 . 11/11/2012
Aww kyon so cute. I love that name. Some parts were quite confusing because there was no paragraphs
Cielheart Ie'chan chapter 18 . 11/11/2012
Waaah, this fic is so cool _

Btw, I choose Kaspada
TheAnimeZankyou chapter 18 . 11/10/2012
I love what you did with Yuzu. I would like to read Karin at the beach
I found a few mistakes. One where Byakya tells Karin she is a captain.
Narunosuke-Namikaze-Uchiha chapter 18 . 11/10/2012
well you made yuzu a bitch... HA! i find it funny sorta
Guest chapter 18 . 11/10/2012
Do Karin at the beach, that sounds better.
Sehpolion chapter 17 . 11/9/2012
Amazing! If only I could write as good as you.
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