Reviews for Unburied
AwesomeA101 chapter 18 . 8/13/2016
NOOOOOO! YOU CAN'T END IT HERE! It's been like 3 years but this is the one story that needs to be finished! Gaaah no chapter 18 . 4/23/2015
Gosh... I can just hear the shear sound of my heart tearing slowly, tendon by tendon, torturing me, but somehow still keeping me alive... Nevertheless, I still have this (probably sick) idea of a Johniarty spinoff fic of which Jim realises his feelings for John, which he ignores first, but then start breaking down a little by a little until he confesses. John is then released and somehow still finds Moriarty and stays with him as he like Jim but Jim is slowly torn by guilt yet is still holding up together because of John's presence and comfort... I don't really know, I might just be me who wants to have a happy ending for everyone yet still manage to torture Moriarty...
Anyways, love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next though I really fear greatly for the state of my heart...
Guest chapter 18 . 9/29/2014
you ever going to finish this?
An Enigma chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
Oh my god, I'm reviewing! You don't know how rare this is, you should take a picture. I only review for those stories that really get to me, and this is just amazing. I love stories about Jim becoming obsessed with John. I love BAMF!John stories. You took one plus one and made it equal cake (No, Mycroft that's MY awesome cake. No eating my cake. Get your own)! Also, you get a gold star for using proper grammar! Seriously, it's a pet peeve of mine. I like to UNDERSTAND what I'm reading. Anyway, back to the topic at hand. Your awesome-cake story. Good that. A. See, you get THREE-COUNT THEM, THREE PLUSSES! Not four, though. Four is reserved for Johniarty. You do that, and I'll give you that fourth plus. Now, you need to UPDATE! Pardon more capitalization for a moment, but YOU MADE ME LOVE YOU VIA YOUR AWESOME-CAKE STORY, TAKE RESPONSIBILITY! I may or may not be getting a fanfic account of my own soon, so you'd better update by then (Unless someone is dead/dying. If you are dead, though, revive yourself. You being dead would just be lazy)... Well, I think I'm done here. Stay awesome, and stay golden!
rawrxsushii chapter 18 . 12/13/2013
Aw god. This is beautiful.
You are planning to update this yes? Please?
Thank you *bows*

Never in my life have I thought that John can be a ex-assassin with a fake life and Harry as his best friend. Oh God. HEADCANON accepted. Also not much Sherlock in this series but that's okay- for once he seems completely lost about everything but maaaan so in character when it comes to him caring for John.
rabbit keys chapter 18 . 11/2/2013
rabbit keys chapter 17 . 11/2/2013


please don't

reflekshun chapter 18 . 10/23/2013
Does MorMor refer to a schitzophrenic Moriarty?
That was a terrific chapter! Thanks for posting it so quickly.
reflekshun chapter 17 . 10/23/2013
Yeah, I'm oiay, thanks. I really hope that you meant that the last thing Watson heard was Moriarty whistling as he cut off his own fingers, but somehow I think not. Damn, was that chapter INTENSE! I cannot wait to see what Moriarty and Sherlock have to say.
13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 17 . 10/23/2013
Brilliant! I love the rhyme running throughout the chapter - "Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me," the contrast of torture with a children's rhyme is quite disconcerting and frightening. I can't wait for more!
Rache-stands-for-revenge chapter 17 . 10/23/2013
ITell chapter 17 . 10/23/2013
Holy . . . holy . . . I need a paper bag . . . gonna be sick . . . going into shock.

Poor John. Scary Moriarty. I have shivers.

Thanks for not getting graphic with the finger cutting, I've always found that less is a lot more when it comes to horrible things.

Great chapter, well worth the wait :)
Thecumberbitch chapter 17 . 10/22/2013
Please continue
chubbybunny96 chapter 16 . 10/9/2013
This is possibly the most horrific thing I have ever read. It's like a promo teaser which we have waited for three years to see and only features some sharp coat angles and mustaches. You disgust me, you writer you. You know that you have a legion of readers hanging onto every genius-soaked word, and yet you have the GALL to tell is what to expect without yet delivering; telling us a building is rigged to blow and then dancing away. Well I shall have to remedy this, and pester you into updating. As always, you are the light of my life. Although sometimes you're like one of those super bright flashing colorful strobe lights that give me headaches. -Moony o
prettyredfox chapter 16 . 7/30/2013
TTTT Oh noooo! Let it be known, I don't deserve the angst and heartbreak and all that stuff! I was enjoying your story before. Oh, and Mycroft is an ass. I'm just saying. I don't really have any constructive criticism so far, but if that's what you'd like I'll keep my eye out. Thank you for posting so fast by the way. I've been following this for a while and it's nice when you post chapters as fast as you do.
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