Reviews for Digimon: Evolution
gabumon4ever chapter 16 . 11/3/2012
(kim likes to be called kairi)Jake and Kairi's mom and dad died in a fire when they were 2 so,they could barley remember them the Orphans Care had rushed them to Japan to live with their only pair of living grandparents, but grandma had died when they were 6 they all knew Jake and Kairi would have to go to an orphanage soon Grandpa wasn't doing to well when jake and kim were 8 Jake was riding on his bike and stopped very suddenly when he noticed the guy right in front of him hi kid the guy said do you want this digimon card it doesn't work for me I have A feeling it might work for you uh ok... jake said he then rode home he could hear the weird guy wispering that's 2 down I still have years to find the rest when Jake got home Kairi looked the card over like it was from outer space or canada where'd you get this again she said lightly as always I told you Jake said some dude just gave it to me Ok i'll get our D-phones Kairi said she got them Wait what if it has a virus, and we don't even have digimon Jake Jake didn't want to hear her yapper she was silent any other time he took the D-phones and swiped the card through Kim's 1st nothing happened then his something happend the D-phones lit up at the same time then stopped at the same time Jake and Kairi stared at their new digimon Kairi picked up her D-phone and went to her room then she noticed she had the gold card she went to give it back to jake then saw he was holding a gold card too but Jake had only brought 1 things Jake angrily says hey,don't delete your own digimon or don't call your digimon a loser if you do your the loser Me and terriermon fight as 1that's why we win we're a team we've never lost a battle Jake didn't believe in digimon being real though one day he was the 1st one up he watched the news he was surprised to hear about an elephant rampage then thay showed fotage of the event they were at a party or something then the ground started shaking whoever was filming it had the bravery and stupidity needed to get up close to it they went out the window and got a great view of the"elephant" he paused ran to his room and got his digimon cards he grabbed his D-phone too he went through his cards untill he found the one he was looking for Mammothmon he held the card next to the T.V it was a match he unpaused it what happened next he had no Idea when the video was over the reporters said if you think you see a digital monster we suggest tharapy Jake secretly believed terriermon was the same one from before (in every digimon game he ever played his partner was terriermon he thinks its the same 1)...keep the chapters coming
gabumon4ever chapter 16 . 10/29/2012
grab a box because it's time for... Gabu's center welcome to gabu's center where i talk/write about totally random crap sooo... i think this story needs a theme song then we can worry about getting it on tv ok that's settled :brave heart is perfect next on gabu's center will kai ever eat pie or climb a tree:i don't know you hippie. people these days seriously get on my nerves ok now it's time for name changer kimkairi please i don't like the name kim anymore{no offence anyone named kim} not like kari from 1/02 {say kai then re} next if digimon were real what would you have to do to get to the digital world: download it?will d-phones turn into digivices I Don't Know Read The Story hippies okey that is all the time we have until next time cause a war, slap a donut,then say hi to the devil
gabumon4ever chapter 16 . 10/29/2012
please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next you have fans ºº{the circles represent a happy face by the way} gabumon for ever
gabumon4ever chapter 16 . 10/21/2012
ok i know my other 2 were bad but this one's good the reflect card it reflects the opponents attack back on the opponent but after it is used a few times it weakens the users attack youd have to train to get you're power back up gabu out
Tamer 0f Light chapter 18 . 9/30/2012
Hope you update again soon :D
Gallantmon7196 chapter 18 . 9/29/2012
Great chapter can't wait for next.
corinster2 chapter 18 . 9/29/2012
Hope my OCs appear soon... Great Cap.!
Luna chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
This is really good so far. Not sure if your still accepting ocs but I'll tell ya anyway. Oh, I noticed you didn't put gender up there so I'll add that in.

Name: Rin Satsukiyami
Age: 13 years old
Gender: Girl
Hair color: Dark brown, almost black in two long pigtails
Eye color: marine blue
Height: err... 5'2? sorry not good with heights...
Personality: She is kind and caring and a bit cocky but has the strength to back her up. Always puts others before her self and would put her life to protect those close to her. Tends to give strangers the cold shoulder. Has trouble trusting people/ making friends but is extremely friendly to those who are her friends. Gets a bit depressed/distant at random moments. She also gets bored easily because she has ADHD. She is also has asthma but only suffers from it when large amounts of smoke surrounds her.

I know you said not to give a digimon but I've had this oc for a while so I have a partner determined aready.
Partner: Dorumon

Forms

Fresh: Dodomon
In-Training: Dorimon
Rookie: Dorumon
Champion: Dorugamon
Ultimate: DoruGreymon
Mega: Dorugoramon
(in case you add the whole burst mode thing...)
Burst Mode: Alphamon (Hopefully you don't have him in mind already as another character. If you do then you can change it to whatever you see fit.)
Tamer 0f Light chapter 17 . 9/17/2012
More More More :D
gabumon4ever chapter 17 . 9/17/2012
I really like this story,its possibly one of the best on this website can't wait to see what happens next
Cadet2499 chapter 17 . 9/15/2012
I love this story and cant wait for more chapters too come out! ;D
Dana Kishimoto chapter 16 . 9/12/2012
I think we have a new season of Digimon here ladies and gentlemen! But being serious here, I really enjoyed reading this so much that I can almost imagine seeing this on tv. The story is developing quite nicely and all of the characters are very likeable. One problem though is that some words are misspelled and it might cause some confusion with your readers. Aside from the spellings, I couldn't really see anything else wrong. With all that said, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Dana-chan out!
Tamer 0f Light chapter 16 . 9/11/2012
Keep going :D
corinster2 chapter 16 . 9/9/2012
If the blond-haired girl with Gatomon was Jenny, I said you could make her digimon Lunamon.
gabumon4ever chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
i have come up with another battle card called the power boost invisiblity card it turns the digimon invisible and fills the digimon with a huge amount of power realeased in one gigantic attack normaly its a one hit wonder but you never know the power given to the digimon is varied the tighter the bond between digimon and tamer the better the card will work it is a very rare card and difficult to get your hands on
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