Reviews for It Has Begun
Guest chapter 12 . 9/8/2018
It has begun. Sooo good
HemlockAndy chapter 12 . 8/27/2018
This is an incredible story that truly conveys the tense relationship between Renard and Nick. Love your writing and story!
JackNo1Better chapter 12 . 1/25/2016
I really liked your voice of the Captain, I found just like the show... I still don't know if he's trustworthy or not but you make me want to trust him! :) Thanks so much for sharing.
Singollo Lomien chapter 3 . 4/15/2014
So far I absolutely love your take on Renard. It is the truest to his in show character that I've seen so far. Renard is a really complex character and not entirely a good guy even when he's on the same side as Nick. On the other hand, I can see them coming to some sort of terms with each other and learning to get along.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Very good.
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 12 . 11/4/2013
Very nicely done. Interesting, thoughtful, in character...on that front, I particularly liked how you portrayed Renard. It makes sense with the story, and while I like the idea that Renard has come to trust Nick more or less in the show, I really like this too. :) Faving.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/17/2013
Great story! thanks
Lorelei Candice Black chapter 12 . 5/1/2013
First of all good work on your fiction.
I just wrote a new crossover between Grimm and The Vampire Diaries called Alaric Grimm. Could you please read it and tell me what you think of it? If you like it, could you share it with your readers?
Thank you!
Lorelei Candice Black
Nic chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
Again, best Grimm fic writer here. And by here, I mean you. That was a blast! Why can't we have that level of communication and coherence in an actual Grimm episode? You should be on the writing staff. Great work!
Ariana Deralte chapter 12 . 1/13/2013
This fic was such a joy to find. I've been looking for a non-slash fic where Renard was revealed to Nick and taking it from there. The actual show has been so disappointing in this respect. I love how you used Monroe as well. Looking forward to more. Cheers.
kirallie chapter 12 . 1/10/2013
Good work! Poor Monroe, glad he'll be okay.
thomaseliot chapter 12 . 12/10/2012
Oooh...Finally! How I have longed for a fic regarding Nick/Renard politics. It's all bloody slash! Major props for the fake key - a forgery always seemed to me like the best way to handle that. I'm secretly hoping he did something like that with the coins too; I mean, I totally don't buy how quickly and completely he trusted his mother despite her long absence and timely reappearance, but somehow I don't think that'll happen.

Only thing I would have done differently than you was have Nick wise to the REASON Renard had his Aunt killed: specifically to deprive him of the last of his family, to leave him alone and ignorant and vulnerable to manipulation. There is no way Renard should have been able to talk his way around that. That said, I think your version is more believable, canonically...Nick is really just an amateur at politics. Sigh. I just want him to kick ass, all the time, but this does not make for the best storycraft. So it's a good thing you're the writer.

On that note, any chance of a sequel? Thanks for writing. :)

JFJD chapter 12 . 11/18/2012
This was a great story!
JFJD chapter 11 . 11/18/2012
I loved that Sean genuinely did not understand why Nick would not let go of the "past." Lol. He's seriously not right. Lol. *sigh* I love Sasha.
JFJD chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Omg! You write for all the shows I watch! I read one of your Smash stories a few months ago and I loved it.

Anyway, I loved how this was written from Sean's POV but it was written in third person. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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