|Reviews for Flowers Will Bloom Without a Pillar (Formerly Winter's Tale)|
| ascella star chapter 10 . 3/11/2015
So! I am finally here.
Interesting chapter the way your fighting scene developed was quite fluid.
Also I liked your OC. Jajaja giovanna is such a crybaby! A strong one, but a crybaby nonetheless
I would love to read more about kendrah and hikaru developing a friendship... Perhaps kendrah could help her with the voices(ahem nova)
Umi and zenvo i feel like a confrontation is coming quite soon...
Lets are what will happen next
| ascella star chapter 9 . 12/28/2014
Ahhhh such a nice chapter... the girls beginning to atone for their pasts and now looking for solutions for the land's future...
Jajaja I liked how umi was looking for any injuries lantis may have given Hikaru... nope, not such luck... hopefully all that lantis would like and would do to hikaru are lots and lots of hugs and kisses...
And such a good thing that the girls are giving hikaru their support..? Even if they didn't know she need it...
Let's see what you have in store next...
| ascella star chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
damn! nova that was a nasty trick! even nastier nightmare...
the way you portrayedhow hikaru's dreams with nova are really vivid... i wonder if in any moment hikaru considered herself schizofrenic...
hopefully mokona was there to bring her back to reallity... iven if that reallity is not much better that the dream... but well, at least here nobody really hurt her...
aaaaand... yeah! hikaru has a crush! hikaru has a crush! hikaru has a crush!
hikaru has her own knight in... shining black armor! jajaja
althought her reflexion of how his older brother could have been with him was quite endearing... i have always thought that, had clamp developed more of zagato and lantis past, we could have dircovered that both brothers were really kind with ach other...
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 10 . 12/17/2014
Hi! At last
Did i tell you how i loved the names of the characters? Well I do! I think you have a mystical power to give names.
I like the way Kendrah and Amati behave. Kendrah is a little too crazy in my history, but I think she is only the product of too much suffering and betrayal. And of course, Amati, the way you described as calm but a little warm, and later cold, and again warm is really nice to read. They are strange people, you capture that.
In my opinion, and of course this is truly not objective, THE moment is when Hikaru joins the fight and Kendrah look at her, as the warrior of fire she really is..is THE moment when they found they are the same soul.
I like the way Giovanna is so powefull, being Amati’s sister, and the statement of Zenvo. Is quite good and inspirational
And the closure of Umi, Fuu and Hikaru about their guilt. Very nice.
| James Birdsong chapter 10 . 12/15/2014
Cool chapter ten. A good story of course.
| ZeyMoonsea chapter 10 . 12/4/2014
Yey new chapter !
just light-readed it now.I was a bit tired.I'll do a detailed reading tomorrow or sooner:)
To this point I liked how the OC's are adapted to the was a surprise for me although I was aware of Amati,kendrah and 's an air of the greek mythology in this chapter,and I also liked it.
I'm curious about the next chapter too,keep up the good work :)
| ascella star chapter 7 . 8/27/2014
i have always thought Fuu and Ferio are cute together... sometimes sickenly sweet but still cute...
here i think they are showing a more mature side of their personality... then again after what happened to them in the last war... it is understandable... they are still tender in their hearts and feelings...
i kind of understand fuu, she always prided herself of being intelligent and to find out that what she thought as right was not entirely lo, and what she thought was wrong, was while seing it from another point of view as right... should have shocked her a lot...
then again i absoluely loved the way they confide in each other... the freedom they feel to talk about what ails their hearts and minds without having to pick carefully their words...
in my opinion you captured perfectly their relationship...
ahhh by the way! sorry for the delay in reading and leaving a review...
i had a pair of free hours so i decided to pass by!
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 9 . 8/3/2014
and here..traduction..jejejeje (so tired...have to use google traductor :P)
First, an apology, as I read the chapter a while back, but had been unable to sit down and write the review (I hate doing in the mobile)
I do not know why, but it sounds like you're putting together an end. Am I wrong?
Well, I think as always, the mix between anime and manga has found a healthy and full of feelings point. I keep thinking in the beautiful lines that girls Hikaru question about high swordsman. Very well written, jumped smiles on my face unintentionally.
Will they manage to convince everyone that easily about their destiny is in the hands of all and not a single person?
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 9 . 8/3/2014
Lo primero, una disculpa, pues leí el capitulo un tiempo atrás, pero no habia podido sentarme a escribir el review (odio hacerlo en el movil)
No se por qué, pero esto me suena a que estás armando un final.¿Estoy equivocada?
Bueno, creo que como siempre, la mezcla entre el anime y el manga ha encontrado un punto saludable y lleno de sentimientos. No dejo de pensar en las hermosas lineas en que las chicas cuestionan a Hikaru acerca del alto espadachin. Muy bien escritas, saltaron sonrisas de mi rostro sin querer.
Será que ellas logran convencer a todos fácilmente acerca de que su propio destino está en las manos de todos y no de una sola persona?
| James Birdsong chapter 9 . 7/11/2014
Of course this is a cool chapter.
| ascella star chapter 6 . 2/9/2014
Well... i'm finally here...
I know I am quite shameless for not coming here earlier, but here I am...
The chapter... well... it gave me several emotions... clef having a moment of reflexion, and thinking how everybody look up at him, but nobody really cares about him, that comparative with the princess was deadly accurate...
Then here comes Umi.
I really felt her grieve... and her sadness, all that emotional burden on her mind. And then after learning the truth behind the actions of those she mistook for foes...
The conclusion they come up about the system... little by little more people are coming to that realization... which makes me kind of glad... too bad still now the citizens still want an easy life without thinking about others sacrifices.
I liked the part where clef felt kind of loved and appreciated, leave it to umi to read in his emotions and without knowiin it, bring the confort he desperately needed...
As always a great chapter... I promise not to make it that long until the next one...
Have a nice day!
| James Birdsong chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
You were rigth. I love it! I smiled more than once reading it. Specially when Hikaru quedtion herself about her crush. Cheeks turning red hahaha. So good!
And the nigthmare.. I really picture that in my head.. And with music! So.. Nova's voice will return? It is only the beggining?.. Awww long wait, but i liked a lot. Im already thinking in the next one!
| zini-ya chapter 7 . 10/6/2013
im waiting for an update. I love your story!
| AdiaSkyFire chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
Know I'm not very familiar with the manga, so I was surprised the intercom change is seen in the anime for a couple of rings here. I like how you capture the feelings that only occasionally glimpsed in the series and so far this chapter has been the one I liked, except the first, as it is very accurate in its narrative and is very true to the characters. You feel the love for each Fuu and Ferio, is almost palpable! You know I'm not a big fan of this couple, but your story here deserves a standing ovation.
However, in my view, although I do not see the goal you want to pursue the story. I like to get honest reviews and also write it that way. Have you explored the time is each of our beloved characters, but what next? You are about to add from this starting point a side story or'll include things "unseen" or the manga or the anime? you give more context as you did with Alcyone and history of friendship with Emeraude Hime? You need a "hook" as we say here in Colombia .. something that makes the reader need to be very aware of what will happen in your next chapter, in my view ...
It's just my humble opinion. A hug. Take care.
PS: All of this required the help of google translator lol