|Reviews for Riders on the Storm|
| RoryCullen chapter 19 . 10/29/2013
New York City on Halloween has to be crazy cold, and they were on the roof, no protection from the wind for over two hours with no clothes on, or hardly any...I'm surprised they didn't get hypothermia. I sure wouldn't have wanted my first time to be out in the cold, but these two seemed to enjoy it. Sonny certainly was respectful and a gentleman with Maggie. I hope Maggie is just as into him as he seems to be with her.
I can certainly understand Aro's reaction to Sonny and Maggie. If I were Sonny I would have kept trying to make it work and remain faithful until after the baby was born and she had moved out. Sonny and Katie love each other and maybe she would have changed her mind about accepting his family business... after-all it is her father's line of work too. But then it quite likely would have ended up being a repeat of her father's failed marrage with her mom.
| RoryCullen chapter 18 . 10/28/2013
I am worried about Caius being unkind to Layla. I hope she is safe.
| RoryCullen chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
I like Maggie. Glad she is back.
| RoryCullen chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
I didn't find any of Damion's thoughts offensive, i am surprised that you would be concerned about that. I did find Sonny and Edward busting in on Damion when he was trying to speak to his girl annoying though and now Edward is forcing Damion's hand and making him join the family business whether he likes it or not... that just makes me mad. I wonder what Bella/mom would have to say about that. I do get it though, that at this point maybe Edward had no choice and may be doing this to keep his son alive.
| RoryCullen chapter 15 . 10/28/2013
That's just f***ed up... Damion and Amelia. I get that Damion doesn't have a clue what could possibly be upsetting about that whole situation, but why did Amelia even go along with any of it? I'm glad she finally made her thoughts and feelings known. She is a good girl after-all.
| RoryCullen chapter 14 . 10/28/2013
I look forward to Damion working things out - manning-up - with Amelia. He needs to tell her how he feels and stop being so scared.
| RoryCullen chapter 13 . 10/28/2013
Kylie is pregnant? Dame is scared to make a commitment, and Maggie isn't giving up. I think Kylie and Maggie would make good friends.
| RoryCullen chapter 12 . 10/28/2013
Rebound girl? Two weeks, two years, sounds about right.
| RoryCullen chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
Amelia sounds perfect...but so does Maggie. I feel sorry for Maggie, although if he didn't want to see Amelia I might feel sorry for her.
| RoryCullen chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
This is very sad, since I know that she probably is screwing with him. She leaves him again, doesn't she? She breaks his heart. I wonder will he even get to know his daughter?
| RoryCullen chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
Interesting dialogue between the brothers and father and uncle, however I got to say I found it more than a little confusing... does Dame have to join the family business, or not?
| RoryCullen chapter 8 . 10/26/2013
Great chapter. Loved that Edward was able to apologize to his daughter and feel bad for thinking of her as a "loose woman" rather than what she is, his adult daughter who loves her boyfriend. I am glad that through Edward we got to know Damion better, and I see now that he is pretty messed up emotionally but underneath he still has a lot of goodness in him.,, what a relief. Thanks.
| RoryCullen chapter 7 . 10/26/2013
Boy they were all so wordy. I remember how that feels to realize your father doesn't see you as his "little girl anymore", that you have grown.
| RoryCullen chapter 6 . 10/25/2013
So this is Maggie...I read about her in the reviews. What a sweetheart. I wonder why Kylie didn't text her brother or her parents to at least let them know she was ok and in the care of Gio? Silly girl, making them all worry like that.
| RoryCullen chapter 5 . 10/25/2013
I really, really hate the man you have turned Damion into. I can't really make sense of it either. He was such a loving, caring, happy boy and now he doesn't seem to have a conscience. He enjoys killing people, and he almost sexually assaulted his Aunt. He seems so entitled. He doesn't seem right in the head, and I don't know why he would turn out like this.