|Reviews for Riders on the Storm|
| RoryCullen chapter 4 . 10/25/2013
Carlisle is a funny man; I mean it boggles the mind that he has planned this romantic evening for the following night, and yet tonight he knows that his wife wanted him to come home with her, and that she has arranged to have their children away and looked after, to have the house to themselves, but he has to pull a power trip and ruin the romantic evening she planned by going to his brothers and now going to a strip club and by the time he gets home he will be tired and she will be pissed at him and probably already asleep. I'm relieved that he is not cheating on her at least. Great chapter, fun getting to know them all now that they are older. I think Edward should talk to Sonny about what to do with Georgie, since he seems to be close with him. I hate that Edward is up to his usual shit and plans to take out Georgie just because he told him everything about Dame and Sonny working together. He couldn't exactly keep a secret from the Skip...as you said. Geesh!
| RoryCullen chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
Beautiful, heart warming and endearing. I wasn't sure if I was going to enjoy reading this chapter because Kylie seemed like such an immature, spoiled brat, but I loved it.
| RoryCullen chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
Cool introduction to the kids. So I had it wrong...Damion is involved in the family business, he just doesn't have his button...yet. I feel bad for Santino, that he doesn't have his Katie, since he loves her. I wonder what happened? Did she marry a guy who is not a made man? Is that why they broke up? Sad. Anyway, great chapter.
| RoryCullen chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
So Kylie has grown up to be like Hanna, and Carlisle is borred with his young wife...or something... and up to his old ways, and Sonny and Katie didn't get married. At least Edward and Bella are still happily in-love and Damian managed to stay clear of the family business... thank God. He was always such a sweet boy, so full of life and love; the business would have snuffed his light, out.
I read the first two parts of your story and many of the outtakes over at the Coffee Shop, where they are unchanged to meet FF rules and loved them so much. I don't know if you go over there very much or not but I left you lots of comments on each chapter and there are many others who have left reviews as well. I think I am going to read this third part of your story here...at my usual haunt. I first heard about this story from CaraNo, as she mentioned your "Storm" world in her a/n for one of her chapters of "Grand", when her Vegas Mob family went to visit your NY Mob family. I really loved that chapter and fell in-love just a bit with your 14 year old Edward and just had to read more about him and Bella and Emmett and Ed Sr. and so much for sharing your story, I am enjoying it very much.
| Fleur50 chapter 55 . 10/21/2013
| Fleur50 chapter 54 . 10/21/2013
...et j'ai découvert avec bonheur qu'il y avait une suite.
| Fleur50 chapter 53 . 10/21/2013
J'ai lu avec beaucoup de plaisir...
| Fleur50 chapter 52 . 10/21/2013
J'attendais que vous finissiez cette troisième partie pour vous lire.
| Fleur50 chapter 51 . 10/21/2013
Merci à votre bêta qui me permet de lire facilement avec Google Translate.
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