Reviews for The Noble and the Broken
redwolf2313 chapter 3 . 12/4/2016
please continue please
Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2016
I personaly prefered the original chapter even though Matt was more aggresive , also you forgot to mension that it was Jade's blood that healed him since she didn't bite her tongue this time , or maybe it is her saliva that has healing properties in this revision ? maybe I am just paying too much attention but I though I should mention it . I like the story so far and your descriptions are very good , you control the pace well :)
lsutigers chapter 3 . 1/24/2016
please continue please
Qaths10 chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
I liked the first chapter, but is a matter of taste, I like this fic I hope the next chapter.
Greetings and happy holidays.

sorry if you do not understand my writing at some point, but my native language is not English
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2015
The original are better. Stick with it and post a real update BC this is a good story.
megameneko707 chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
Hey, you alive? Can you update this fic? I really do love it so please update! Thanks and ciao
Wolf2468 chapter 2 . 10/14/2014
Please continue please
bloodydragons chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
Please update: )
WolfGurlBlue chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
plz update
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
keep going it's great
zjnat chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
This story is great, I hope you haven't givin up on it :)
Web Slinger Spidey chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
Looking forward to reading more
Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2012
I like the concept, hope to see that this will get updated and continued.
Eliley chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Arcus Iris chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I forgot what the original chapter was like so... yeah... but I like this one!
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