Reviews for A Moment on the Beach
HaeJae chapter 2 . 3/24/2016
when will je update?
Sara khan chapter 2 . 6/2/2015
Add some misunderstanding between the two couples so that u can make a great fanfiction
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24/2015
Shane and Kira
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
This is super awesome. I want more
mozart chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
WRITE PART3 wire blake and tori tell the team
jazlyn powell chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
the bomb
wolf lover of michigan chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Nice start wouldn't mind reading more
Lioness Of the fire chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Lioness Of the fire chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
Aww it sweet I love it, gosh takes me back to watching them. Love those 2 .
Some advice be sure to really thing your scene through, re-read them or ask someone to read them so they don't feel rush.
JuseaPeterson chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
I really like how you have Hunter and Kelly together. It would be interesting to see some more conversation between them about it and just different interactions. It would be cool to see the other guys with girls, perhaps to see how Dustin/Marah, maybe Shane/Kapri...Cam/Hayley...though I know ultimately it's up to you. Anyways, it'll be cool to see what you have next.
LamoyaSmith vs blakeNtori chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Good job...
Kitten9322 chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
Yay you updated! Yay for Blake/Tori and Hunter/Kelly(even though i like Hunter/Kapri a little more but Hunter/Kelly is okay too)! You should so put in Dustin/Marah and Shane/Skyla and Cam/Leanne! Idk who you could put Kapri with though hmmm and maybe you could have like a new evil guy come in and kidnap the girls or something like that! Update soon!
Kitten9322 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I know this is my 2nd review but you have GOT to update this! Pretty please make more chaps! Make the other couples Dustin/Marah and Shane/Skyla and Cam/Leanne! Please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I will review every chap and help if you need it! I promise! Put these couples in the story PRETTY PLEASE?!
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This was really cute and a good start if you do make it into a multi-chapter story. I would really like to read more. I love how you have the simple easy nature of Blake and Tori's relationship and yet you still have the unsure and shy part as well. I also love how Hunter was a part of his choice and that it didn't get overshadowed.

Great job. I love Blake and Tori and I loved reading this.
LamoyaSmith vs blakeNtori chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Awwww loved it...
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