|Reviews for Miki's Last Wish|
| silverstar chapter 1 . 2/17
i wish this was how it ended so sweet
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12
The best ening ever I appreciate your talented ways of recreating story ending which trully gives the reader the "hook" into reading it
| MarshalRather chapter 1 . 2/3
Liked the original story and this was a great ending, thank you for writing it!
| T28000 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
I like it and it makes me feel like crying...
but I just feel like the ending of Strangled Red wasn't that bad. It seemed like a godd cliffhanger but it's your opinion. :)
BTW This made me decide to write my own after story for Strangled Red but not following this ending. So thanks and sorry :)
Another BTW Your stuff is great. :)
| Shadow'sDelight chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
| thedeathcannotdie chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Your writing style is well performed. However, the concept here is flawed. Strangled Red is a story of horrific tragedy taking place in the otherwise happy go lucky realm that is the Pokemon World. This mildly sappy, happy ending has no place in it. Steven was driven to revenge and madness, as was (presumably) Miki. There is no reason to replace the original ending with this.
| deathleader chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
happy endings all round
| Random person chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I don't know if its possible for you to reply/read this, but if you can could you write like a continuation of this story? Like steven's so called re-adventure?:D i jus rlly like the way you wrote this story so...
| Random guy chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
This fanfic was awesome:D i can't stop reading it again and againXD could you write more pokemon fanfics maybe?:D
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This story made me cry i was so happy to find a better ending to that tragic story
| Alen chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
yo dude this was amazing can you do creepy black next
| Darkling Dweller chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
A nice change to the original story. Although I enjoy a good creepy story, it was becoming a humdrum experience. Taking a good story and changing it to this was a rather surprise to me. Good read, great ideal, all I have to say is keep up the good work.
| makaxsoul4life chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
very good..i enjoyed it have anyone evry hear about hypnos lulliby
| YT Austia2001 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
It's really good I enjoyed it you didn't know what was happening next. Great job! The creepypasta inspired to play my Pokémon games and get a girl Charmander named Miki, who is now a full grown girl Charizard, that I just love and adore so much. I have at the front of my crew on soul silver. I looked up some Charizard pictures and used them as my thing that people use to draw and I put a sharingan from Naruto and which is my clan symbol and her name on a scarf that she wears on her neck from when she was a Charmander. Her is a bit of a background to the drawing of her and I drew her now and her as a Charmander.
| GenesisResist chapter 1 . 1/27/2013