Reviews for Kidnapper's Magic
Jay Madeleine Gryff chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
please continue this story
lilypup chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
suggestion have numiar in some sort of blood bond would say use an illusion but i am going to use that for my story and am deadly afraid of being called a copy cat but it sure get my juices flowing it so tempting to continue the story for but i wont i promise- great story a
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Interesting! Never thought Numair could be bad! On the side, I think you accidentally wrote "defiantly" instead of "definitely" (where Daine could tell the figure was a man. And why would Numair be sent in as a kidnapper with no backup?
roseflorintine chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Um...if it makes sense, you're trying too hard. The stuff is overly wordy. Also, I doubt that Daine would cry THREE days after Numair's death. Even for the sake of others, she would pull herself together. Your idea is good, but stop over analyzing. Just get it down and leave it at that.