Reviews for The Break Up
Faberrittana99-03 chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
Sadly, the only one that made me cry like a baby was Santana and Brittany's. You did a great job, so much better than the show a song about being together forever and all that bull they did on the actual episode. Great job. :'(
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This was corny and sad, thanks a lot for crushing my spirit a little
Spaceship Coupe chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
simply incredible. I love the natural progression of the other couples to brittana. as much as I hated they broke up, you still have a little hope at the end...I think you should write a sequel. cause holy crap that was good.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
wow. that was just a painful and so emotional breakup. but very realistic...definitely what happens a lot. the breakups where you let someone go? UGH. you wrote that so well. and your last line? killed me. well doneeeeee
just a liar chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Wow, this is just... Heart breaking. But still, I love it. Maybe a sequel? Dunno (:
celluloidtears chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
That was painful as all get out, but so well done that I can forgive you a little for the pain. ;-) Seriously, though, fantastic job.
ClubParadise1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
that was horrible! i mean not your writing that was really good your very talented.

but it was horrible and it made me cry.(just Brittana tho cuz i could care less about the rest of the couples NOT including Klaine) i need a moment im gonna be balling my eyes out when they break up forreeal... well in the show i really hope they get back together soon after

any way you should send this to ryan lol because britt and san's break up was like awesome but in a bad way idk if you know what i mean but thats how it should happen in the show too... ryan will probably ruin it knowing him and the writers eww THEY SHOULD HIRE YOU
We're A Two Shot chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Oh dear god you've got me FRIGHTENED of the real Break Up episode for Season 4. This was great yet so sad. I really enjoyed how it was a story about everyone but it was through Santana's eyes. People were everywhere feeding her little information on everyone else's break up. It's too bad nobody clued her in on her own. Ugh, my heart now. But I had to read it! It was so good!
iamabicorn chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
The Brittana breakup concept in fics is not what I usually read. I mean, I love angst, but my OTP feelings are usually too strong to allow myself to read them. But I saw the reviews for this story, and I just couldn't help myself. I'm glad I read it because it was so heartbreakingly good. I loved seeing the progression of worry that came from watching the other couples break apart. And the angst didn't take me completely over because I can see just the smallest sliver of hope in the end of the story that maybe, just maybe, there's still a chance for them. If you ever get an inclination to write a sequel, I will be one of the first to read!
Rosetoast chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
A sequel or a chapter 2 would be good. Js.
hopelessdreamer3 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
and now i am asking why i read this
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
What! Worst bad bad you broke BRITTANA!
okiku31 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
You have me sitting at work, crying like someone died. I love this story.
booknerd4 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Omigosh even I hate the fact that Brittany and Santana broke up, the way you wrote their break-up scene was the best and really captures the reality of break-ups. So sad but beautifully written.
PhoenixShan chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
ok that was heart breaking but lso confusing as hell..why did they break up?what was the reason?i just don't get it.
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