Reviews for Forgive Me, Father, for I Will Sin
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Great Story!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
I want more!
Babe Pryor chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I could def read MORE...just sayin...xx
imustbecrazy chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
would love to see a multific made out of this little ditty!
Annie Larsson chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Awesome oneshot!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
loved this! and how they ended up in bed the 1st time together, that was priceless! great o/s
StickyFeathers chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
loved it!
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I absolutely LOVED this story. I hope you continue it as well I would love to read who these two make it work!
movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
two thumb up. nicely written!
kittiekatz34 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
mmmmm...olderward...love it!
Darkward Darling chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Loved it. A really sexy but not menacing Olderward, yum!
MildredDempsey chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
This story I like. It's the first one I thought was well written and possible. LOVED it when Bella had to riad Charlie's condom stash : D
twilightobession chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
LOVE this story. I hope you will continue it. I am putting you on notice. Hope to hear from you soon.
DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
in my mad rush to read all the entries before voting closed i never got the review so i'm back to let you know that i really really enjoyed it! i sorta kinda wished there was more hahaha there was just something about these two that felt real and like it could actually happen and it completely won me over when he showed up at the end :) GREAT ENTRY!
Dutchie La Rue chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Hot Hot Hot! We need to learn what all these reasons it can work out between these two are! Not to mention the fact that his condo is in Seattle far enough away from Daddy's prying eyes!
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