|Reviews for Chuck vs Lockdown|
| Kina Kalamari chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
Oh my goodness. The end of this was absolutely perfect. I mean, the rest of the fic was awesome, but that last section moved beyond awesome and stepped into the territory of epic.
Just curious — did you guys do this without actually knowing what the other person was going to write? If that's the case, kudos to you for coming out with something this cohesive. My sister and I tried to collaborate that way once, and it was the most inane drivel on the planet. (We were going paragraph by paragraph, though, which might have had something to do with it.)
Anyway, loved this story. Great job, both of you. :)
| CaryR chapter 6 . 12/21/2013
Rereading every story by you and Doc in Oz just because they are so good. Thank you and best wishes for the holidays.
| Steampunk.Chuckster chapter 6 . 10/10/2012
You guys are fan-freaking-tastic. I don't know what else to say, really, except that I thoroughly enjoyed everything, all the way down to the witty authors' notes. WELL DONE!
| Roger chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
Thanks for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it.
| rphe chapter 6 . 10/2/2012
fabulous story. laugh out loud funny, and really well integrated given that you wrote separately as you did. its all good, but I think you write Casey particularly well. the deadpan delivery of some of his lines was just brilliant, and so typical of the character at his best. no idea about the theme - maybe denial? on reflection maybe we need more chapters to work it out. after all, it seems perfectly set up for a sequel ...
| KryptonitePoison chapter 6 . 10/2/2012
This was a great chapter. I loved Chuck feeling of Sarah's side of the bed and thinking last night was a dream and wishing Sarah was there. And then she came in and caught him and said she did the same thing. But how could she when he was still in the bed? Three variations later. I'm not sure what that ment but I liked it. Chuck would have stopped if he knew breakfast was getting cold? I wouldn't have you can always reheat breakfast. I love how Casey knew they had finely done it, his "about time" made me laugh. I love Chuck blurting it out, and Sarah slapping herself. I'm glad Casey was ok with it. The cyanide capsule bit was funny. I love Bechman saying it's about time. I'm glad she was ok with it. Sarah's reaction to hearing that was hilarious. I love Sarah's squee, and how exited she got. And how she wanted to go shopping with Ellie to buy stuff. Yes Sarah, your a real girl now. No, I don't think tranqing her would stop her. When I get back from shopping we're going to have a ton of sex. I love Ellies squee, but when did she get home and what did Sarah tell her? Chuck wanting to stay in the CIA bothers me because I would be afraid something bad would happen to Sarah. I mean, look what happened on the show. And yes Sarah you are AMAZING in bed! Thank you for this story, please write another.
| Doc in Oz chapter 6 . 10/1/2012
Ah, pillow fondlage. That takes me….. nevermind. You’re right, it’s like Ellie and Devon were just forgotten by lazy writers.
“No battle plan survives meeting the enemy.” Proof – Chuck’s outburst to Casey after Sarah’s careful planning.
You once commented that I can write Roan so you can hear him speak. You, Beckman, the same thing. The clincher is the word ‘do.’
In a deleted scene from chapter one, I wrote where Ellie ‘plozed’ at the news of Sarah moving in. I am so glad I didn’t post that, because your Sarah hitting resonance is now my favorite mental image. And the eggbeater. What is it about women and comforters (that’s the fluffy thing around the base of the bed, right)?
And have I mentioned how glad I am that you asked for the last chapter? Because the scene with Sarah both missing the white picket fence and noting how Chuck had been needing this to move on was both moving brilliant.
Oh, and Sarah’s assessment of her prowess in bed? Inspired. And never ever ever argue with her about that.
| ersk4 chapter 6 . 10/1/2012
Back in the old, original "Star Trek" days, it was big deal and often fun when they made Spock do "un-Vulcan" like things. Sarah's reaction to Beckman's "It's about time!" was certainly on the level with that. What a great and fun scene. Sure would have loved to have seen that on the TV series. Great and fun chapter!
| Sudden Radiance chapter 6 . 10/1/2012
Thanks for the story and what a great collaboration! If you guys had fun with this, how about some more?!
| wassupchuck chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
Hey! A great story! Kudos to you both, and thanks for a great story. I got the feeling this was a "be careful what you wish for moment" until they finally got their acts together... Thanks again.
| Katsumara chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
So.. this chapter, no wait. This story as a whole was just.. amazing. I don't really know many other words to describe it that'd fit the situation other than 'amazing'. I enjoy both of your writings so much, so to get a collaboration from you two.. allow me to fanboy-squee.
The line of the chapter for me, though.. well the whole bit when Sarah realized that it was okay with both Casey and Beckman, LOL. Also Chuck's reveal to Casey. That was pure hysterical. Had me laughing out loud for real, :D
But really.. thanks for writing this. I miss 'Chuck' every day, so to get stories like this.. it certainly helps.
| Katsumara chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
Awesome chapter, you guys! Also wait.. there's another coming up after this one? Oh boy.
but seriously.. the 'big reveal' was great. Loved that moment between them. Absolutely loved it.
| JustMyLuckiness chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
A Chuck story where the characters all communicate openly and work together to solve problems? Be careful or Fedak and Schwartz are going to come after you!
Seriously, this was an awesome way to end this story. I loved Casey's reaction to Chuck blurting it all out, but the supreme cherry on top was when Sarah squee'd. "Perfectly good CIA agent and you broke her" almost had me crying in laughter. Well done!
| grandetiopaco chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
A great chapter. I loved the story and the ending. I also accept the challenge but(since I fairly certain I won't figure it out) please let us know once you have a winner.
| Marc Vun Kannon chapter 6 . 9/30/2012
and a Jayne reference too. Very much liking real-girl Sarah. Strange, though, how Ellie magically appeared at the end of the story. And what news could Sarah tell her, anyway?