Reviews for A Girl You Knew
Guest chapter 44 . 6/8
This made me sad. I hate that Mack died. I ended up shipping them, loved them more than Matthew. Your Matthew simply is not the Matthew we know and love from DA and Mack was a better pair for her in this story. I was on board until he died. At first I thought Mack would be gay, and they’d have a wedding for appearances, then it wasn’t the case, I thought they wouldn’t be a match in bed, but they were, and he was just so perfect in every sense it became impossible for Matthew to compete. I’d love to read a best friends to lover story from you. Your writing is really good, this one just isn’t a Matthew x Mary story. Mac was her best match. And specially since he died, Matthew could only be her consolation prize. They’re not soulmates in this story.
Guest chapter 44 . 4/29
On December 1, 2015, you wrote, "I promise, promise, promise that the next four installments (including epilogue) will be posted this month."

You're late.
Guest chapter 44 . 4/26
"And I promise I am already working on the next chapter."

It must be one heck of a chapter!
Guest chapter 44 . 4/26
Well, you updated this in 2015, and it's now 2022. We're still waiting for you to fulfill your promise.
Guest chapter 44 . 3/12
This is a fic that I always enjoy going back to and rereading once a year. Hope life is treating you well!
Guest chapter 20 . 12/20/2021
This is a truly beautiful story. Well written and gripping. However I need to stop because you have confused me to my core. I feel as if I am Mary, torn between two men. The past the future and everything in between is a mystery and my anxiety cannot take it. Maybe someday I’ll return when I’m stronger. -Meghan
Guest chapter 44 . 8/27/2021
This fic is so brilliant. I can’t even. I’ve read it sooo many times.
Heather35 chapter 44 . 6/2/2021
"I promise, promise, promise that the next four installments (including epilogue) will be posted this month." Hahahahaha! You wrote that in December of 2015.
Guest chapter 44 . 6/2/2021
From chapter 43: "But I promise that I will finish this so if you are still with me, I am still with you." Obviously, keeping your promise means nothing to you - that's unfortunate.
Mmfan1 chapter 44 . 3/22/2021
I can not begin to tell you how much I love your writing. There is so much depth and emotion, you can feel the inner turmoil of each character. You have drawn Matthew and Mary so well. They went through so much because of their own choices and because of fare. Yet you have lovingly let them find each other and written them so completely.
Oh how I wish you could complete this fic! But even if you cannot , thank you for this lovely story.
bex.goldstein chapter 30 . 1/27/2021
I really like it how simple it was. They just found each other, at the right time and place. I guess life in Sybil and Toms is easier so they can be free and for once do it their own way. I like how they seemed to have an agreement from the moment they saw each other
Great chapter ! I really really do like it
bex.goldstein chapter 27 . 1/27/2021
The way you write Mary’s pain and grief is truly amazing. I can feel every bit of pain she feels
bex.goldstein chapter 26 . 1/27/2021
That was mean of Edith! Mary just lost her husband and also her child even though she doesn’t know. It’s not fair to her. Amazing chapter as always!
bex.goldstein chapter 25 . 1/27/2021
This chapter although very sad was so beautiful. You can feel Mary’s pain and sorrow. She loved her husband deeply and it’s going to be very hard for her to move on.
I really love your writing style, it’s so beautiful
bex.goldstein chapter 24 . 1/27/2021
Poor Mary, I really liked how you wrote her sorrow. The denial of not believing he was death. I’m so sad! They were about to have a baby and now she’s a widow and only has her memories of her time with Mack.
I was wondering if Macks constant mentioned of the red walls in the last chapter was somehow a sign or something ? Great story !
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