Reviews for A Girl You Knew |
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![]() ![]() Wow, a lot of very entitled people judging you for having a life here. Very rude! Thank you SO MUCH for this story and all the others. And for giving them to us for free! I wish you the best. |
![]() ![]() This made me sad. I hate that Mack died. I ended up shipping them, loved them more than Matthew. Your Matthew simply is not the Matthew we know and love from DA and Mack was a better pair for her in this story. I was on board until he died. At first I thought Mack would be gay, and they’d have a wedding for appearances, then it wasn’t the case, I thought they wouldn’t be a match in bed, but they were, and he was just so perfect in every sense it became impossible for Matthew to compete. I’d love to read a best friends to lover story from you. Your writing is really good, this one just isn’t a Matthew x Mary story. Mac was her best match. And specially since he died, Matthew could only be her consolation prize. They’re not soulmates in this story. |
![]() ![]() On December 1, 2015, you wrote, "I promise, promise, promise that the next four installments (including epilogue) will be posted this month." You're late. |
![]() ![]() "And I promise I am already working on the next chapter." It must be one heck of a chapter! |
![]() ![]() Well, you updated this in 2015, and it's now 2022. We're still waiting for you to fulfill your promise. |
![]() ![]() This is a fic that I always enjoy going back to and rereading once a year. Hope life is treating you well! |
![]() ![]() This is a truly beautiful story. Well written and gripping. However I need to stop because you have confused me to my core. I feel as if I am Mary, torn between two men. The past the future and everything in between is a mystery and my anxiety cannot take it. Maybe someday I’ll return when I’m stronger. -Meghan |
![]() ![]() This fic is so brilliant. I can’t even. I’ve read it sooo many times. |
![]() ![]() "I promise, promise, promise that the next four installments (including epilogue) will be posted this month." Hahahahaha! You wrote that in December of 2015. |
![]() ![]() From chapter 43: "But I promise that I will finish this so if you are still with me, I am still with you." Obviously, keeping your promise means nothing to you - that's unfortunate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can not begin to tell you how much I love your writing. There is so much depth and emotion, you can feel the inner turmoil of each character. You have drawn Matthew and Mary so well. They went through so much because of their own choices and because of fare. Yet you have lovingly let them find each other and written them so completely. Oh how I wish you could complete this fic! But even if you cannot , thank you for this lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it how simple it was. They just found each other, at the right time and place. I guess life in Sybil and Toms is easier so they can be free and for once do it their own way. I like how they seemed to have an agreement from the moment they saw each other Great chapter ! I really really do like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you write Mary’s pain and grief is truly amazing. I can feel every bit of pain she feels |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was mean of Edith! Mary just lost her husband and also her child even though she doesn’t know. It’s not fair to her. Amazing chapter as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter although very sad was so beautiful. You can feel Mary’s pain and sorrow. She loved her husband deeply and it’s going to be very hard for her to move on. I really love your writing style, it’s so beautiful |