|Reviews for A Moment's Distraction|
| tvchick81 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Adorable. Simply adorable. Wonderful writing and story. : )
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
SUPER CUTE idea and story-REALLY liked it and I love this couple! Nice job!
A few things though-you used some vocab incorrectly:
you mean emphasizing, not empathizing;
palate instead of pallet (and actually, palate is your taste, not your nose)
Watch your tense-keep them all the same.
Overall, really good story and execution. In character.
First fic? NICE! Hope there are more!
| Arkumon chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Great story. Please continue writing!
| AlwayzOlicity chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
So cute! I really love these two.
| suburbs chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Adorable - great one shot!