Reviews for Child of Heart's Beginning: Ancient Lesson
LeafeonLover chapter 32 . 10/17/2014
Woah there is some serious love triangle going on here! I cheer for atem. Atem for the win! Seeing death usually does change a person so
Etimes for the better but they will never change completely personalities don't usually do one eighties very often unless ya know you have a spirit living in an ancient artifact that takes over your body... But other than that probably not.
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Violet Lilypuff chapter 31 . 5/11/2014
Will Bakura be saved?
BlushLover930 chapter 31 . 4/10/2014
Love this story!
StarGlow chapter 31 . 3/22/2014
DARN IT. Why does this story have to have to much despair!? You better write that by the end of this story, there will be a happy ending for all her friends and family. PLEASE! She's starting to lose all hope if she doens't redeem herself. Especially for Atem, Seto and Bakura.
LeafeonLover chapter 31 . 3/18/2014
Poor amber it wasn't your fault people died .
Amber and seto are kind of like skyward cuteness but I can't help but feel atem and amber would be better together they do have a special connection and they understand each other
Atem is so sweet as well
But I'm probably bias
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jade.olson.5494 chapter 30 . 2/15/2014
I love this story! It acctually cleared up some questions I had on the order of events. I can't wait until you put out more chapters!
LeafeonLover chapter 30 . 1/25/2014
Finally everyones back together now -
Seto was rather heroic there wasn't he ;D Hehehehehehe
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AbyMoOn chapter 29 . 12/13/2013
Hahaha Love this story. I read all the chapters in 2 days. Oh and a quick side note I love how she has almost the same name I have ( Mine is Ambar. :)
LeafeonLover chapter 29 . 12/13/2013
U just love cliffhangers don't you ;)
I hope amber will be okay but I mean of course she will be she's a main charcter and of she died there would be no story -
Poor BAKURA he's much nicer in this story than the anime
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LeafeonLover chapter 28 . 8/23/2013
Also
ROADTRIP BAKURA AND AMBER!
LeafeonLover chapter 28 . 8/23/2013
Okay I have no idea what the second one was about buuuuut
Six months goodness that's a long time
Atem should just full out kiss her when she gets back _
And everyone will be happy :DDDDDDD
LeafeonLover chapter 27 . 8/23/2013
Yay amber kill those bastards _
:DDDDDDDDDDDDD
Leafeonlover chapter 25 . 8/23/2013
U should never accept flames
What u should saybis if u flame I'll make the demons hunt you down and send you to the shadow realm mwhahahahahahahahahaha
Anyways at least brother and sister are back together now :D
Can't wait to see what happens next
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Leafeonlover chapter 23 . 8/23/2013
*cough* um I know I haven't reviewed in a long long long time and I feel bad
Though at least I get to read all the chapters and not wait for an update _
Anyway of course amber wouldn't die she's the Oc in this story aint she ;P
Oh and I feel soooooooooooooo sad right now
Atem loves amber
But amber loves seto (still don't like him)
And seto loves amber but won't admit it which is hurtful
Oh and toonkid
If u remember a while ago I started writing a yugioh fanficof my own then I sorta dropped it for rise of the guardians
Buuuuuuuut I finished rotg and went back to it
Soooooo if u still wanna be my beta reader
U can be
But I understand if u don't wanna anymore /
But I don't know when I'll publish it or if I will
But if i do then it will probably be after rotg finished publishing
So yah
Anyways let me know
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DRAGONCUTIE13 chapter 27 . 7/8/2013
Journey! woot! can't wait to read more! hahahahaha let me know when you have another chapter up!
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