|Reviews for Breaking Barriers|
| Haseo55 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Interesting, thou i find it kinda weird how he just fell asleep. The site nees more Ar Tonelico love since there are not enough stories.
It would be Funny if he has Resident evil,lords of shadow or even Mortal Kombat there.
| Infernity VS chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
I interested with your story...it been a while since there were writers other than me write a fanfiction about Ar tonelico. However, it looked make sure make a new line when a character talk for future references as well as make it easier to read. Other than that, I don't see anything wrong.