|Reviews for Code Geass R2: From Within|
| Inverness chapter 20 . 5/18/2013
I'm very impressed with this. Hope to see more soon, it's been far too long.
| The King in White chapter 20 . 3/10/2013
I must admit that it's been both interesting and annoying. Well constructed and well written, but you have the distinction of one of the most aggravating Lelouches I've ever read.
| dzk87 chapter 7 . 1/17/2013
Something feels a little off... but I like it so, keep on going.
| dzk87 chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
Interesting chapter, but you need to put in more details, and make events clearer.
| AvianReader chapter 19 . 12/31/2012
Actually, people under the effect of Lelouch's Geass have no memory of what happened while it is controlling them. Even Suzaku wasn't really able to control his Geass command until after they thwarted the Ragnarok Connection. And if he himself recognizes the danger that a KMF arm hanging by one cable over him, his live Geass would be able to recognize it as well, since it allows him to dodge bullets he wasn't even aware of. And if he were playing cat and mouse with Lelouch, he would still be screaming at him to come out and face him (watch the Black Rebellion), especially when he is as angry at Nunnally's death as he was for Euphemia's death.
And it's Guilford, not Guildford. Also, I don't think Suzaku would have as much trouble with dealing with Guilford as he did here.
And where was Cornelia all this time?
Anyway, this chapter makes a pretty exciting chase scene, and, well, not many writers actually dare describing a Knightmare crushing humans like beetles.
| Fangking2 chapter 19 . 12/30/2012
Ah...I see...yeah that makes some sense. The Geass has their own rule and if the rules clashes there will be a loophole
| Burnished Angel chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
| AvianReader chapter 18 . 12/1/2012
Rolo actually wouldn't be disturbed/disappointed by Lelouch's mass-murder. he's an assassin, so he should be used to seeing death by now. If you take another look at the beginning of R2, Rolo seems like a heartless bastard. In fact, at one point, the first idea that comes to mind for him is to assassinate the person that's causing him and Lelouch trouble (see R2 Episode 5 Knights of the Round, around 6:30)
| Marine3950 chapter 17 . 11/13/2012
I swear, you just had Nunnally kill herself, I'm sending CC after you.
| Fangking2 chapter 17 . 11/11/2012
oH...you stole christmas
| AvianReader chapter 17 . 11/11/2012
...*faceplants on the ground* Uh...what will Lelouch think of his actions when he regains his memories? He just permanently scarred Nunnally for the second time (the first being the "witness" of Marianne's death)
And...uh...while it's sorta funny that he just commanded his siblings to die while wearing a Santa Claus hat.
Anyway, you should take out the first "you" from Lelouch's command of "You, all of you...die", because in my opinion, the shorter the sentences, the more drastic they are.
| Noble1998 chapter 15 . 10/22/2012
| Sodar chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Ok, Ok, before I go any further - how in the name of the Great Spaghetti Monster did Rolo managed to use Geass to partially dodge the Knife? It stops ones perception of time, freezing him in place, it does nothing on inanimate objects. If the knife was already mid-air it would do nothing. Seriously, I know you that stuff, how could you let it slide :p
| AvianReader chapter 14 . 10/16/2012
Lelouch should step up in Todoh's defense, since Todoh's the only one of the BKs other than Kallen that's vouching for him, right? Unless he just doesn't care...
Also, won't people be puzzled that Zero hasn't made a public announcement? Especially after owning the Britannians so thoroughly?
Anyway, I didn't really mean that your entire fic was similar to Megiddo, just that scene in the previous chapter.
| Gunmare chapter 14 . 10/16/2012
Nice chapter as always. Please continue. Also i want 2 know how to make a rolo cc couple work.