Reviews for Oh Brother
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Please tell me there is more to this wonderful story I need to know what happens. I loved it!
jk chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Ya I bet jaspers pissed lollololololooolllollol
Halo221 chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Oh wow, what a place to stop! I hope you'll continue this!
LolaTheSa chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
I LIKE TO LOOK AT IT LIKE THIS. Eventually jasper aaccepts that she loves ed phyically and him he finds a parrell to let all be happy. Except ed loves emotionally too. But bella can't give him that so i think ed would have eventualy just left breaking bella heart, thus realizing she loved him.

That's my little take on how this would have went.
mrs-taycob chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
i just LOL-ed at the end! It was super hot, and i seriously hope Jasper won't end up killing Edward :D
Kate1386 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
WOW just... WOW
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Oh damn!
MsTorres chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
LMFAO! Aw Jasper! She done got some of Edward and couldn't stop the ache! I wonder what happened next? LOL

Ms Torres
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Erikajo chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Whoops!
LeAne chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
OMG, I love this story.
jhsdishidjmc chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Write more!
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Oh wow. SO HOT!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Uh oh what's cliffhanger
bluewolfeyes chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
it seems that the story ended in a cliffhanger? I was wondering if there will be a story continue this?
pipelynn chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
OMG! cant believe you ended it here! this was so crazy...i kept thinking bella would find out jasper was cheating or that she would get pregnant...are you going to write more? hope hope!
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