Reviews for The Journey Home
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
will you please finish this I loved it
Guest chapter 8 . 11/28/2016
Guest chapter 8 . 7/8/2016
please update
Bruhnana101 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
I love gregor t overlander! Great continued fanfic on GTO. DUDE I WORSHIP GLUXA. #FANBOY. IGLUXA.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/29/2016
At first this chapter confused me. Then I realized that the wish she had was to have her parents back. So maybe the only way to have them back is in a dream...

Salamence989 chapter 8 . 3/1/2016
please make more
Greenyugi chapter 7 . 2/24/2016
Oh my god its a miracle. thank you so much for coming back
Luxa4392 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Margaret was Gregor's father's grandma not gregor's.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
Keep righting! Great
The Toast Ninja chapter 6 . 2/19/2014
This is a good story. I hope you update this! I like the idea of them having relationship problems and not being totally mushy and in love. You have Gregor in character which is rare in most fanfics, so great job! I think Luxa should be a tad more regal and haughty, after all that's who she is even if she is with Gregor now. Great job otherwise. I hope you continue this story!
SamsungPony chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
I like the idea of Luxa and Gregor having issues in the relationship. Most people just make them love birds. Good story and good writing. Can't wait for the next chapter
Jedi1 chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
Welcome back. I agree how can they not be ok with here marrying the warrior.
Greenyugi chapter 5 . 4/15/2013
The Naked King chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
I'm reviewing your story because I'm waiting for Grandma to pick me up and I'm bored.

First of all, short chapter, but we've talked about this before and that's okay. No one on has long, sweeping, grandiose chapters unless they're a) me, b) writing an extreme au or c) a badfic writer.

For such little content you sure packed a lot of emotion into the chapter. One of my favorite things about your writing has always been your ability to evoke really strong emotions. You're good at that. It's very moody writing, but considering your lyrics I'm not surprised. It's fabulous and I'm sure it only gets better.

There are three or so grammatical things that are stupid that you shouldn't worry about.

I think my biggest serious crit for you is your formatting. What you've written is novel but some of your paragraphs are a bit long for the computer. It's okay to have long paragraphs every once in awhile, but if you do it all the time it gets hard for the reader to follow along on the screen. Try to break up your paragraphs a bit more. I know it sounds stupid and I personally don't care, but it actually helps you get readers. Wren told me this, so I'm not, like, bsing you.

Congrats, though, on having more reviews than any other fic of mine except SM! Small fandoms ftw!
Kat chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
I love it! Don't stop this piece, you are really good with your writing!
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