Reviews for Breaking Midnight
DemonRaily chapter 1 . 2/15
I quite loved the story, it was short and really sweet.
Hawkflight7 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Oh! I don't feel the relationship went by to fast. It was good and realistic. Very nice fic for the coupling.
I haven't actually finished the game... so I'm a bit confused what's fic and canon concerning backstory but still, I like! The moment I saw Ashe and Vaan on the screen together I thought of them as a perfect couple . all meant to be lol 3
VizzyBruv chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
this is a great read, wish there was more chapters. though I doubt it would convey into an interesting series, so keeping it as a one-shot type of fanfic was most suitable
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
good romance?

well, I really, really liked this short homestuck one-shot:

archiveofourown dot org slash works slash 305459

you don't really need to be familiar with the fandom to read it (although some terms might be confusing, some you could guess some from induction, but here are the definitions anyway, and explanation for some references, just in case:

hive: a house

block: bedroom

matesprites or matespritship: think human lovers

ashen: a kind of relationship involving a mediator and two violent but romantically involved parties

kanaya and vriska are humanoid, grey skinned, black haired, yellow and orange horned members from a violent, war-focused species with strange ideas about romance but who otherwise look more or less human; when one characters says she "pities" another, it's the equivalent of human romance- same when she says that she is "red" for someone

rose and jade are humans

"Wizards": rose has many strange pictures and statues of wizards in her house because her mom was eccentric and liked them

"Squiddles": cute tentacle creatures from a children's show, jade is a fan

"normal dreams": the characters were involved in a very complex plot, a part of which involved interacting in their dreams in a strange reality

in the canon story, kanaya and rose get fairly close, even hook up; jade had her own plots going on and was friends with rose and other teenagers, but didn't interact much with kanaya)
Imashitowareto chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
ooo!so sweet when i read through the end!i love it!thanks for sharing!i love to read more!is it can be another episode for it?
PieroXVII17 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is really cute and all, I found myself liking it a lot. However, I think you should check for spacing and spelling errors before you upload though xD
Dracorum chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This is good! I must say I like your brand of romance much more than the typical multi-chapters love lost and drama that comes with it, etc etc. Some minor transitions that could be polished, but the heart shines through I never thought I could like the Vaan/Ashe pairing but you've made me a believer!
Scatterheart Angel chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This is completely adorable! Those sweet little moments between the characters pulled the romance together. I hope you write more for this pairing.