Merci pour la lecture.

In other fics Peter the Rat is eaten by Nagini.

In one of my favorite stories Snape is slowly boiled alive in a cauldron.

He doesn't deserve to live after all the deaths he has caused.

My theory is either Lily or Petunia are adopted.

I choose to think Petunia is the one adopted.

Dumbledore would not know, which is a possible reason the Dursleys where able to hurt Harry.

I have an idea for a story. Tom wins, but destroys Britain. All of it, not just the wizzy world.

Bellatrix is there and the shock of all the destruction drives her SANE.

Bellatrix travels back in time to her childhood, exactly when is your choice.

She befriends Lily because she realizes it was Lily's trap that killed Tom the first time.

Pairings are up to you, but I suggest Lily and Regulus, set up by Bella.
Lily and Bellatrix sharing a man is a possibility, James is an option.
Maybe Arthur and Narcissa?
I despise Molly, Ron, and Draco is a waste of magic. Let them never be born.

There is a great story where HERMIONE is sent back in time.
ROUNDABOUT DESTINY

A second Draconica is good as well.(fem!Draco)

Everyone does fem!Harry, almost no one does anyone else.

Severus Snape had TEN YEARS to grow up and get over his hate of a dead man.

He did NOT.

I think Snape was set on darkness and evil from a Very Young Age.
probably somewhere between 4 and 7 years old.

You are right, very under reviewed...

I reccomend some minor edits, spellchecking or such, it will bump the story into sight again.

Just finished the fic and loved it!

Thank you so much for Writing the story. It was very enjoyable.

I'm sorry, but this was a half-decent outline for a story, but it wasn't a story. You have an interesting basic idea, that Lily received the Harry Potter books and decided to change things, but it really needed to be fleshed out to be an enjoyable story.

like this story pretty good give it a 8 out of 10

Excellent! ~~ Snake ~~

bonne fic!

I CANNOT believe that Lily and Petunia are related.
One of them has to be adopted.

I remembered after I posted the last review there is a fic where Severus Snape is truly redeemed.
ROUNDABOUT DESTINY is the title, Hermione goes back in time.
She and Lily manage to do it.

I think you would have to start in Snape's First year to redeem him.
It is not an easy task, one way would be Sorting Lily into Slytherin with him.
Another one requires Albus "head up his ass" Dumbledore to punish bullying.
Lily is the only person who has any hope of getting through to Severus.
I will have to look for some Lily and Severus stories.