Reviews for Beacon of Hope
DaedalusDelta chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
I didn't cry, at least. I sincerely thought this was the final chapter. 7/10.
DaedalusDelta chapter 2 . 1/26/2013
8/10. I want you to reach through the screen if I cry next chapter m'kay?
DaedalusDelta chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
So emotional :3. I would assume this is pre-Prototype 2. 7/10.
anon chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
It's a pretty good idea, just a few grammar errors here and there. Like in the paragraph about Aaron watching tv, you called him Daniel by accident...maybe have someone give your stuff a quick proofread?
Selica Leone chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Aw, this is amazing! I love it, the relationship you've managed to paint is so incredible!
Update soon please, I can't wait to see where this goes!
Ironcoremagma chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Brilliant, haven't read something like this in ages. Please make more of this story.