|Reviews for The Shallow Grave of Secret Longing|
| Magos186 chapter 39 . 1/18
This story was absolutely the most fantastic H50 story I've read so far. Completely heartbreaking, but so so good. I loved it.
| Guest2017 chapter 39 . 10/15/2017
Excellent and different story! Bravo!
And you were able to inject humour in it as well
Enjoyed it very much !
| prislynn chapter 39 . 8/14/2017
I loved this story the first time I read it & have finished it for the second time and love it more this time. I cried and laugh too. But had to say thank you for writing this story.
| Guest chapter 31 . 6/28/2017
Shes right danny and all of them are just pushing steve to do things at the pace they want they need to just back the fuck off
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/28/2017
Please dont have him get with cath!
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/28/2017
I hope he gets into a new romantic relationship i hate cath she broke steves heart more then once and doesn't DESERVE him
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/28/2017
Well this stories ruines now your bringing that bitch in to it!
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2017
Whatever you do please do NOT bring stupid cath in to this amazing story she's a bitch and will ruin it
| Lovingthis2much chapter 39 . 2/24/2017
I am relatively new to Hawaii 5-0 fanfiction, but I have read many, some good, some not so good. But a rarity is a story with a phenomenal plot, great grammar where you don't have to wonder why the author doesn't know their homonyms, and has a command of the English language as well as characterizations. This story has it ALL IN SPADES! I can't stop reading it.
Thank you, thank you for the pleasure of reading this. At times I found myself fist bumping the air it was so good. Please keep writing and know you are so appreciated.
| kyfly1221 chapter 39 . 1/10/2017
Beautiful story! Beautifully written! I couldn't stop reading. I loved everything about it! I just hate that it had to end :D Amazing job
| Soupsdone chapter 2 . 1/3/2017
I just now read this story, and, its incredible. What a gifted writer you are.
| MissSlothy chapter 39 . 8/31/2016
Rediscovered this story over the holiday weekend and spent many happy hours reading it again. Excellent job :)
| TetraFish06 chapter 39 . 2/20/2016
Just read this... it's wonderful. Thank you for sharing!
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 39 . 1/11/2016
Great job. So happy Steve was found and by nice people. But happier he got better and went back to his old life. Its were he needed to e to get better and get over and through what had happened to him.
| Marie-Line chapter 39 . 6/10/2015
I'd only read this one this year, sorry to be so late !, but that was a VERY good one !