|Reviews for Rat Poison|
| Booyahkasha chapter 2 . 3/7
I bet Tunnel Rat gets poisoned. It is called "Rat Poison". Plus, It's from Tunnel Rat's POV. Hurry up with the next chapter! !
| Princess Hinata Bug chapter 2 . 2/6
I love it so far. Can't wait until next chapter. There aren't enough Tunnel Rat stories. I hope u update soon.
| i luv everything chapter 2 . 12/27/2013
please continue i wanna know what happens
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
This story look really interesting are you going to update it or...?
| WritingGoddess911 chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
This is great! Keep going!
| BlueInked chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Interesting premise, everyone seems in-character. Love that you've set it after Ripcord's back. If you ever come back and write more I will happily read it.
| Anvenx chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Fav and Follow, I don't want to miss next update!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
When are they going to get poisoned?
Story's coming along great keep updating.
| Tearhex chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
I know you're proll'eh busy und dun'ave time for a story such'has this...
But it is all that is good'n'wondeerfull on FF!
TwT If yeh get the time.
| Prussian Red chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
Please excuse me while I beg you on my hands and knees to hear more of this story! D: Renegades needs more quality fanfiction and yours is just that! Plus Tunnel Rat unexpectedly became my favorite character so I love hearing stories about him. :)
| CatLover2906 chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
Wooooooo! I love GI Joe Renegades! Sadly...I don't have that channel...YOUTUBE FTW! XD oh... And FANFICTION FTW! Update soon cuz this is a good story!
| annea101 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
eh i am so hopin its t-rat dont know why but im just drawn to him
| aaliona chapter 2 . 1/30/2013
My verdict's still out, but I can't wait to read more. :) There's a lot of potential for you to work with.
| Miss Horsehead chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
I really like the idea of you setting this up as an episode. I've already got my own theories about the poisoning...but I won't post them here.
There are no major technical mistakes, maybe a few typos but that's it.
Tunnel Rat was a great choice for the narrator. Personally, I typically write in third person, because if I write in first person, the character ends up sounding too much like me. I congratulate you for actually keeping him in character. (And I'm a little jealous at your ability to do so.)
I will certainly be waiting for your next update; this looks terrific so far!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
Wooh! Finally a chapter 1! And I really like how you write out the characters. Keep up the good work In the mean time I guess I'll just be patient.