Reviews for Fifty Shades and his Sister
x NikiSt x chapter 43 . 8/11/2014
I hope you'll update
Reds 77 chapter 43 . 6/19/2014
Just found this story and I have to say. I think she's letting her Family Company run her life. She bitch about her Parents leaving her throughout her life, and yet she ran off to ONOTHER Country with her children without giving Daniel a clue. I think that was Soo Selfish. To come home and find your Love and your Children gone, that in itself is hard. Then she acts like she doesn't need to explain herself. And her and Lewis is all too chummy all of a sudden. It seem like she goes where she gets the most attention she did the same with the Grey's. She didn't even introduce Daniel to her Cape town family. she just expect him to swallow her excuses. not one did she take notice of how HURT he was. I think she need to kiss his ass as well. AND SHE DIDNT EVEN MENTION HER PREGNANCY. OK.. Cant wait for up date
Guest chapter 43 . 5/23/2014
Damm please finish it
amysuer chapter 43 . 5/13/2014
Love, love your story. Please continue
kelmal chapter 43 . 5/6/2014
Another great chapter again.
kelmal chapter 42 . 5/6/2014
Another great chapter.
Guest chapter 31 . 5/3/2014
Do you have a beta reader?
Guest chapter 12 . 5/2/2014
Just an FYI, the drinking age in America is 21
Guest chapter 42 . 5/2/2014
Wow, Ivy is being super selfish! The two men in her life that supported her the most and this is how she repays them? Ignoring the first and not caring about the relationship with the second who happens to be the father if her children? Wow, unbelievably ungrateful
R-J briggs chapter 43 . 5/3/2014
Brilliant can't wait for more
R-J briggs chapter 42 . 5/3/2014
horses1029 chapter 42 . 5/3/2014
I hope this isn't the fight for Dan and ivy. He needs to fight for her
kristylg23 chapter 42 . 5/2/2014
i hope that aniel will get the kids and leave with the kids ivy should o that to daniel beore she left town
smills chapter 41 . 4/28/2014
Good chapter
kristylg23 chapter 41 . 4/26/2014
ji hope that daniel will get his kids back soon
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