Reviews for The Living Will
Xthereal-meX chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
13 chapters into this story and i think i've cried more reading them than i have in the past 2 years! your ability to capture the raw emotions and feelings of your characters is just amazing!

i cant wait to read more )
Jeraly chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
A great transition for the characters! Landon is a sweet addition
debslmac chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
muzaklover chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Loved it.
NPakus chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Enjoyed this chapter, too! It's always hard to go back to regular routines after a devastating loss.
barbarito chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Fantastic! I think hottie Landon is going to make Edward a little jealous
Hopesparkles chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Feels like they're turning a corner now and can find their way out of the grief. Jake Dalton, huh? We live in Oklahoma and my 8 year old son is a gymnast. We have gone to watch Jake compete many times with the OU mens team...yes, he's even yummier in person!
Cullenfan524 chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
That was so awesome! I felt so bad for Bella her day was so heartbreaking...but I think the next day will be easier..poor thing!
cejsmom chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Interesting interesting interesting.
KristineM chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
So tough for Bella going back to work! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
alli62 chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
A Landon is needed in this situation because I suspect Edward needs to see said Landon becoming closer to Bella. And then he needs to sit up and say, "hey, I don't think I am liking this too much." Perfect.
Bunch2009 chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Great chapter..
Wine and Cheesy chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
Great chapter. Had to Google Jake Dalton because I couldn't remember him. All I have to say is...DAYUM! He is just the kind of distraction that Bella needs...and he would have stamina and be very flexible. Just sayin'.
COURTNEY1022 chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
I hope Landon doesnt cause some jelousy for Edward.. OK I hope he does HAHAHA
motherbeatrice chapter 13 . 11/2/2012
yeah, I got that feeling that things were going to start to change...and how much is our boy Landon doing? not too much I hope. She needs to be with Edward...
love it!
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