|Reviews for Ashes|
| GlassCaseOfEmotion chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Sorry I forgot I'd only reviewed 4, so here's my final one!
Wow there's a lot of emotion there, poor Dean. It was well written as a "pouring your heart out/angst" story. The first lines are very poetic. I liked the "I'm not going to tell you I love you" bit because it made it a bit more than just another cheesy love letter (which your story isn't!).
| DeandSeamus chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Beautiful, beautiful, wonderful gorgeous sad. So much emotion and hope and then it disappears. I want Seamus to read it! No fair, silly silly dean! :( but its so brilliantly put together and sweet and sad and I feel for him so much.
(P.s. - where's my imagination cookie? :P)
| autumn midnights chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
This is so good! I love the pairing, first of all, and I adore how you've written it. I feel like way too many people forget that Dean's an artist, so I love that you included that detail in your fic. I love the way you write Seamus, even though he's not actually in the fic, technically, because I can just picture him saying 'feckin pansy' and 'bleedin sissy' and he's just so in-character here, as is Dean. No spelling or grammar errors, either, and I loved the section at the end as well that was such a contrast to the hopeful ending of the letter itself. The last line of the entire fic - 'The flicker of hope dies, and your world is plunged into darkness' - it feels like that describes the whole of Deathly Hallows so well, to be honest, and that could be used in so many situations and I just loved it. I love that you remembered that Dean was on the run during DH, I see people forget that sometimes. Great work!
| whatpassesformymind chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Dean's letter was very poetic, and it's sad to think that Seamus never sees it. I hope you win, this is great :)
| Selenehekate chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Oh, boy! Imaginative cookies! I want one! *Reviews*
Anyway... ah, that last line was dark! Damn, that takes a lot of skill. That letter was really well crafted and incredibly interesting. I love the Dean and Seamus friendship, so it was nice to read about them. Aw, Dean! So cute... and sad. Damn. Good job!
| thefirstservant chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. :)) I love the way you characterized these two. :) Dean is do artistic and Seamus is so...him. :)) You really have a way with words. :) There's poetry in this piece. :))
Thank you for sharing! :)
| slightlysmall chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I have a hard time picturing Dean/Seamus but I still love this letter. I had forgotten about Dean's artistic inclination. This is a beautifully written letter. I am not sure about the second person POV at the end though... Anyway, nice job!
| ProfessorSquirrell chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I do love these two so much. The image of Seamus calling him a "feckin pansy" is just so...Seamus. And I love it. I really do. I also really adore that he ends up having to burn the letter since I take it this is during DH some time and while it's heartbreaking, it's how I picture them- writing letters they'll never send. sigh...
| Forever Siriusly Sirius chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
awwwwwwwwww that is so saddd and so beutiful and so so so tragic! I can feel the tears :(
my cookie is chocolate chip with smarties and M&Ms and choclate bits. Yummy.
| ReillyJade chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
So this pairing is totally a guilty pleasure of mine and...wahhh! You broke my little fangirl heart! (In a good way, of course.) This was romantic and heartbreaking and wonderful and beautiful and...GAH! It's was just so many amazing things all at once – and in so few words! Very few fics with this short length can deliver such raw emotion, and you, my friend, have succeeded admirably.
And even in a fic as serious as this, you managed to make me laugh. “Feckin' pansy” - I was laughing like a proper idiot. It's classic Seamus. :)
This was a truly stunning story. Thanks so much for sharing! :)
| inkteardrops chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This is beautiful. Absolutely phenomenal. You have written one of my favourite pairings absolutely flawlessly. This is incredible, it is so heartfelt and the emotions are so accurate. I cannot actually find fault in it. Flawless.
| Someone aka Me chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I think you broke me.
It's too fantastic and angsty.
Nope, seriously. I'm broken now.
I really can't even put into words the fantasticness that is this piece (so clearly I'm forced to use made up words like "fantasticness")
It's just plain gorgeous. Wonderful job!
| awakeatnight chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
This was some really beautiful writing and I'm not even a fan of Dean/seamus. Wonderful job.
| Me chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Gimme a real cookie :( xx
| weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Izzie! My heart just broke! You remembered he paints! Beautiful, you wonderful writer :)