|Reviews for A Perfect World: Nonlemon Version|
| Ryvius chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Huh, didn't know Kinuhata was only twelve, I always thought she was older. Please disregard my statement in my review of the lemon version.
| kevslave chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
(Clapping hands) Good job. Weird at first, but felt okay after going forward. But for some reason, I find Musujime's relationship with Accelerator debatable.
| zecross chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
hm.. interesting? but what happen at the last scene. is it flash back? and the scene before that about that mistery girl..
well that will be answered as the story progress i guess...
by the way what about the other girl that love touma but not included in this fic harem?
update soon bye
| vanitas1776 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Ah? When I first saw on your profile that you were going to write this, I wasn't really expecting a story like this.
It was good though, but I do miss Touma's obliviousness.
Anyway, good job thus far. I hope you write more.