Reviews for Two Kings, Two Queens
Satipheen chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
That was so beautiful and mysteriously intriguing.
Please, please consider turning this into a story, I would absolutely love to read it.
MCH chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Oh a lovely poem but what happened to the King who died? Peter the Golden King put to rest maybe? He is buried by the younger Queen Lucy? The second Queen came and is killed by younger brother so that Susan and Edmund?

So how did this happen? Will you tell that story this is a great poem about a mystery death of a King and what happened to the youngest King and Queen.
WillowDryad chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
That's nicely done, but I want to know more of the story.

I might not have this right but, in simple terms, Susan did something that caused Peter's death (or even killed him herself), and Edmund and Lucy are mourning for him. Then Susan comes to the grave and Edmund kills her.

Is that right? Oh, but WHAT HAPPENED? I'm so intrigued!