Reviews for Adam's apple
TheRobberBridegroom chapter 2 . 6/25/2015
Dear author,

Your english is good for it not being your first language.

Thank you for all you do and write.

Your reader,

-️
Random Person chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Your English is very good. I probably could not pull this off in latin. Try using the past participle instead of got forgot. It makes the work read more smoothly.
heidi chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
that captain so smart, I am fascinated, I love this couple, congratulations
I Hide My Pain Behind A Smile chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
LOVED ITT! Sean is awesome in anything.
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Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Hello, I like the story line but your writing needs some work. You are switching off on tenses from sentence to sentence. Also, try using quotation marks around quotes.
Beyond that, I am enjoying your story already! Keep writing!
A Smouldering Soul chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
It was a great storyline however the format was kind of hard to follow for example I got lost in the dialouge.
nighttimefreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
nice!