Reviews for Pumki
vashthesnake chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
Small correction:
El es solo un niƱo, lo quiero como a un hijo (or "lo quiero como si fuese su madre") y nada de lo que digas me hara lamentarlo.
Good job otherwise!
Hasta ahora la historia me esta gustando mucho!
Percy-Jackson-is-the-best-ever chapter 13 . 10/11/2014
Very confused. Like, a lot. What just happened there? *sigh* Oh, well.
Great story! Going to read the sequel right now!
Dizzy And Dead chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
Dafuq?
Dizzy And Dead chapter 10 . 6/8/2014
Just realized story was complete...
Dizzy And Dead chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
Could you bring in Horses?
Lexisfightingrobots chapter 10 . 4/17/2014
that was horible. im actually really appaled right now. dear god, that poor snake.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
My gawd, that's adorable \(-)/
BurningBunny chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
Reviewing every chapter.
BurningBunny chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Re-Reading all pumpkin fics. )
kat callan chapter 13 . 1/4/2014
Wish, what?
Guest chapter 13 . 12/22/2013
i love this
pumki and pepe are so cutee u
CheyRain chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
I thought you might like to know the exact wording of what you said in Spanish since you got it off of Google Translate which isn't entirely accurate.
"He is not one monster (masculine form), if that is it what (familiar) you are (temporarily) insinuating."
"He is different, and it (familiar) you know."
"He is one baby. It I want like to/of/at/into/by/upon/per one mother and nothing of it what (familiar) you say makes me it regret it (lament it)."
That last sentence could probably be rearranged to be more simple, especially if the word lo had been left out. Some of it just looks strange to me, however I'm only in Spanish 2 so I don't know as much as I'd like to.
Signed,
CheyRain
Penny is wise chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
Awesome story.
TheArtisticIntrovert chapter 10 . 6/7/2013
Nooooooooooooooooooooo! Poor Lih! bad Sally! :-(
Dwanke chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
its pronounced Dwace
goood story
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