Reviews for Pumki
pauc1115 chapter 7 . 7/11
I do not know if you know, since you wrote this a long time ago, but in chapter seven when they sing in Spanish, number four is written as cuatro, not as Quadro. Other than that, I love your story.
Jupitere chapter 13 . 4/30
WHAT THE HADES IS THIS?! DID THY DIE IN A CAR CRASH OR WHAT?! SOMEBODY HELP ME HERE!
raging fire storm chapter 13 . 3/14
confusing, but will be explained as I read the sequels. good job
raging fire storm chapter 1 . 3/14
I'm glad that you decided to make this into a multi chapter fic and then continue to make this in a series
Starlight Quill chapter 13 . 8/15/2016
write more please. wonderfully written
7019289 chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
Please, please, please update SOON!
foxchick1 chapter 13 . 10/20/2015
What the heck happened during the memory lapse?
misuky7 chapter 13 . 10/18/2015
They were such cute children. Go Sally, I cannot wait to read the sequel. :3
vashthesnake chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
Small correction:
El es solo un niƱo, lo quiero como a un hijo (or "lo quiero como si fuese su madre") y nada de lo que digas me hara lamentarlo.
Good job otherwise!
Hasta ahora la historia me esta gustando mucho!
Percy-Jackson-is-the-best-ever chapter 13 . 10/11/2014
Very confused. Like, a lot. What just happened there? *sigh* Oh, well.
Great story! Going to read the sequel right now!
AlyssaIsBeryllium chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
Dafuq?
AlyssaIsBeryllium chapter 10 . 6/8/2014
Just realized story was complete...
AlyssaIsBeryllium chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
Could you bring in Horses?
Lexisfightingrobots chapter 10 . 4/17/2014
that was horible. im actually really appaled right now. dear god, that poor snake.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
My gawd, that's adorable \(-)/
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