|Reviews for Never Alone|
| BlecktheCount chapter 12 . 2/17
XD Sanae Moriya's execution is just too brilliantly hilarious. I hope this one as well a few other stories since your writing style is just wonderfull and reading these do make my day at times o3o, keep up the great work o/
| secretagent erin chapter 12 . 4/5/2013
you better update this soon
*gets out brotato*
| evil spirit mima chapter 12 . 3/9/2013
i was really happy when you put
me-sama in your story i mean i mima the great is obviously
the greatest carachter there so
pleasa continue writing
p.s the comment is me language for i like the story
| Ebonpyre chapter 12 . 2/17/2013
Certainly one of the most unique and interesting novels I've read, also fairly humorous with my favourite humor scene being Remilia having a certain complete and utterly shitty piece of detritus excuse for a vampire novel given to Flandre. I'd love to read a description of what Flandre does with it.
| Timeskipper1 chapter 12 . 10/11/2012
Soy sauce and syrup? AARGHH! SANAE IS REALLY EVIL! Poor Rumia, maybe we should call Reimu, huh? But not now, first let Rumia get a little karma. I'd say that the next guest for Moriya could be Yuyuko, but I fear that she would eat everything, and when she's finished Sanae M may decide to change methods.
Battle of charisma? Mmmmm...
I won't comment, but it's really silly.
Oh, and... Wriggle, if you ain't a masochist you'd better ask Sanae to do something about Yuuka. After all, she'll never get rid of her old habits if she doesn't stop, huh?
Well, all in all it's nice to have you back, especially on Never Alone. This chapter was... meh. I'll wait for the next ones, anyway :-)
| Azure Xuchilbara chapter 12 . 10/11/2012
First off, I would like to say that I enjoyed the food-based play between Sanae Doll and Rumia-chan...And yes, the above soup is enough to churn normal stomachs into a cesspool of malign gases and whatnot...
Secondly, yes, Madam Charisma has met her match against the original gangsta of Gensokyo (and as baced by fan evidence)...
Even Remilia did not deserve to grasp that vile book of sparkliness and ridiculous excuse of a supernatural literature...
AND SHE GAVE IT TO FLAN OF ALL PEOPLE!
I am dearly afraid of what this will do to not only her, but the consequences of this decision...
With that, I also congratulate you on making Kisume-chan smarter than a certain gang of miscreants combined...Her personality to her lover, er, I mean her spider friend/caretaker was very wondrous...
What she said in that paragraph made me gawk and nod in approval...Kudos on this great chapter
| Azure Xuchilbara chapter 11 . 9/25/2012
This was a very heart-warming and heart-wrenching chapter because of the wondrous background of our resident flower youkai...
You did an excellent job with making her background and how it fits into both fanon AND canon...
Now, I wonder how "ozuu-sama" will fair dealing with a MILF of a ghost living in her mansion...Or rather, how the rest of SDM reacts to the (formerly) magical malign maiden that is Mima
| Azure Xuchilbara chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
And here I was looking forward to some Sanae Doll x Rumia love, love...Ah well, I wonder how Team is taking their absentee's absence in their merry-making...
That said, I do would love to see the faces of a certain heart-stealing Black-White, and the (former) USC when their beloved mother/mistress/(space left to perverse imagination) meets them...
News flies faster than danmaku in Gensokyo, after all
Kudos on the dialogue exchange between Sanae Doll and our favorite Sorceress Ghost ani-MILF...
| Timeskipper1 chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
Oh, finished already? That was... pretty fast, if I must say.
Ok, I'm not gonna lie: I didn't like this chapter. I didn't like this chapter not because Mima came back (if anything, that's a plus), but because everything went, once again, too fast. If you didn't tell us that Mima had actually changed her mind about world domination during the many years spent in Hell, I wouldn't have been able to tell her apart from the previous Mima. She's the same old cocky, Evil Overlord-like, hammy Mima from UE. Or maybe she isn't, but that's what it looks like from how she acts and speaks. In other words, you did too much telling and too little showing her character development. Ok, it happened offscreen, but I think that a thousand years in Hell would be enough to break even HER.
That seems sadly to be the major flaw of your writing: too much telling, too little showing. In the end, it sounds impersonal and doesn't involve the reader emotionally.
Also, why does Sanae let her evil counterpart kidnap Rumia? She said that she's creeped out by that, why doesn't she do anything? Ok, maybe I DON'T want an answer to THAT question. Or maybe yes.
Anyway, still wanting to see the next chapter, so don't stop. But try to follow my humble suggestions, I think that it would improve your stories a lot.
| Sonanoka21093 chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
Ohh, the fun off-screen 20 ways of subjecation were so interesting. *gasps* How bold, M Sanae! Anywho, keep up the great work, and I look forward to more!
| Sonanoka21093 chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
...Urge... to say it... rising. ...Wait, you said saying Mima was fine here. Crap! Mima! Mima Mima Mima! Anywho, I enjoy to find out exactly what's going on with Mima! *giggles* This'll be good... Anywho, keep up the fantabulous work!
| Azure Xuchilbara chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
Ah...Well, once has to be careful when uttering the "M" word in Gensokyo because there is only one thing that happens every time it does...
Also, what Yandere Sanae Doll turned Rumia into...Yes, we all know you'll get a heart-attack if you stare at the most very first Windows Touhou boss for more than a few seconds...
That said, this was a wondrous chapter at cute Rumia-chan's expense...Now, I wonder what a certain ice fairy, her green-haired cohort, a firefly, and a night sparrow will think that one of their team member failed to show up for whatever hijacks they planned for that day...
Overall, an excellent job as always..!
| Timeskipper1 chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
Visitors... from FORMER Hell? What, she dug her way out of hell à la Abbé Faria?
Anyway, she's sure as Hell full of surprises. And it seems that the jail capable to hold her still has to be invented.
Oook, I'll wait warmly to see the mayhem unfold. Surprise me.
PS: Evil!Sanae is reeeeeally creepy. And Kogasa is... unexpectedly sharp.
| Another Man chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
Truthfully, your raging on the author notes is genuinely as awesome as the story is. Kidnapping Rumia was probably the last thing I have ever thought; it usually was the other way round. Lots of creative work probably coming on in this story, I can already tell. Keep this work up!
| Azure Xuchilbara chapter 8 . 9/19/2012
Well this is certainly deja vu...I guess everyone's got darkness in their hearts, but in Sanae's case, said darkness got nurtured from her years of abuse in the Outside World and given life in the land of illogical and magic mishaps known as Gensokyo
Ah...Reminds me of Silent Hill a hell of a lot...Silent Hill 2 and the later part of Silent Hill 3 to be exact
Now I wonder how Sanae Doll is going to interact (eat, sleep, talk) with everything around her...
And what of Mima..? Hell, she fits the bill of being re-habilitated in the GLPC rather than spend a finite number of years in hell (since Japanese hell is like a "Time-Out for doing bad things" before reincarnation, unlike Christian hell)...
Overall, this turn of events has me smiling and wanting more