Reviews for An Unwritten Future
Wokanshutaiduo chapter 13 . 10/9/2016

- She looks shaggable in anything haha Sev getting more worldly by the minute!
- Love him helping her out with fashion haha original Snape would never!
- Fantasising about sex while teaching potions, tsk tsk
- Where did your innocence go Severus
- Well it didn't take long for him to turn into SEX GOD PROFESSOR SNAPE
- Haha omg learning from Tobias Snape's porn stash!
- The frequent assurances that they love each other make my day
- "He was nearly impossible to define" that's basically one of the defining traits of his character!
- Sev makes an excellent househusband. I want him!
- "He used me to drag you back in again didn't he?" Aww Severus :( it's Dumble's fault not yours
- "I'm not a bloody kiddy fiddler" oh my god hahahaha. Although I do love reading adult Snape doing inappropriate things with his students too...
- "I just want to feel important. It's all I've ever wanted." Stop making me cry!
- You damn well better keep her safe ️
Wokanshutaiduo chapter 12 . 10/8/2016
I'm reviewing this chapter and probably the rest of the chapters the same way, stream of consciousness reactions!

Chapter 12
- Fuck off Lily
- James is surprisingly perceptive that is cool
- Bellatrix omg she KNEW
- Severus you DOG :p
- Rabastan on the other hand, clueless sot
- Take that Lily!
- Aww pillow talk
- Snape babies? Oh please yes!
- I love that she finally said she loved him
- So much intensity in his reaction
- So fluffy I love it
oblivionbaby chapter 16 . 10/8/2016
Isn't it dangerous to have so many know her truth? I am nervous for what that could mean for her!

The patronus was a great touch.
oliviahr chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
Okay. Less sweet. Now I want to pinch him in the mean way. #HAFHpotterheads
oliviahr chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
Oh my goodness! He's so sweet! I just want to pinch him! #HAFHpotterheads
oblivionbaby chapter 15 . 10/8/2016
Oh breakfast was brilliant. I am loving this semi-dark, DeathEater!Hermione. The plan to get the cup was genius - but a part of me is jealous FOR her. Great chapter.

Wokanshutaiduo chapter 11 . 10/8/2016
This chapter was so amazing I couldn't even be coherent so I'm pasting my moment by moment reactions here...

Chapter 11
- Fucking Sirius
- Fucking Lily
- Fuck yeah Severus
- Or maybe fuck no Severus? Why is he so mad at Hermione?
- But regardless fuck yeah for telling Lily to shove off
- God FUCKING damn it Lily!
- That reaction basically applies to every time Lily shows her face
- Poor insecure Sev
- I love how good Hermione is at picking him up again
- Virgin Sev! As much as I love a good smutty SEX GOD SNAPE there is something so tender about Virgin Sev
- Wiping away the trauma of Rosebush Jily fuck yeah
- "If you an look at this face and be wilfully deluded why can't o look at your scars and see them the way I want?"
- He loves her ️
Wokanshutaiduo chapter 10 . 10/8/2016
Okay after reading the conversation with Dumbledore I can understand that from his point of view trying to set up Severus with the women in his life is a reasonable course of action. Lily is still a total bitch though. Hermione getting ready for the ball is hilarious. The line where she goes "I want to make Lily turn green" I immediately shouted F**K YES GO GIRL and was so fucking pleased that in the end she succeeded in doing this! And Lily's face when she realized she had been overheard!
Wokanshutaiduo chapter 9 . 10/8/2016
Loved this chapter! Sev is really opening up to Hermione here. SO CUTE HE THOUGHT IT WAS ALREADY A DATE THAT IS PRECIOUS! And I am so glad that he's seen Lily's true nature and become disillusioned to her. True its a harsh reality but this leaves his heart finally free to find love! Goddamn Dumbledore though that is a hell of an invasion of privacy!
oblivionbaby chapter 14 . 10/8/2016
I am in LOVE with Narcissa. All of her Death Eater's wife advice and helping Hermione navigate their social politics is refreshing. I see she is caring even though her values are misplaced, she is not unfeeling and i don't have a reason to doubt her motivations or intentions at this point. I am glad Hermione has an ally in this world.

I suspect Severus is Occluding and is not intentionally being an ass. Either way I want to smack him!

Wokanshutaiduo chapter 8 . 10/8/2016
Loved this chapter so much! I predicted that it would take a round of torture for them to make up; but the mental assault near the end took me by surprise. Absolutely love Sev's reaction though, his realization that he swapped one master for another. Though really, it's not that simple - he's now dancing on the strings of two masters.
I'm squeeing so much that they've made up and that he's accepted she may be right about Lily. And also that he voluntarily wanted to ask her to the ball!
Wokanshutaiduo chapter 7 . 10/8/2016

The heart wrenching jealousy of any Sev fan girl when they see his obsession for Lily. *FORGET HER SEV LOOK OVER HERE*
oblivionbaby chapter 13 . 10/8/2016
I giggled at the line "you helped pick my books out of the mud. You have no idea the effect that kind of thing can have on a swot." Lol

Mmmm curry!

oblivionbaby chapter 12 . 10/8/2016
All the heart eye emojis
Fullofpassion09 chapter 20 . 10/8/2016
Loved the banter and the way the room gave the world outside time to settle so they could well and truly be free!
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