|Reviews for To Zanarkand|
| Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Awe I loved it :)
| JessicaJ chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
I had a dig around on your profile, because I absolutely loved the one shot you wrote for Mulan.
This one... trying to capture an achingly soul-destroying moment of sadness, and yet I felt that you tried to force in too many metaphors specific to certain things, and it detracted from the emotions that you were trying to evoke.
Its a beautiful idea, but my two cents- it might have been more powerful in 3rd person.
| without a trace chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
That was beautiful work there. :')
| lilithemaid chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I simply loved it!