Reviews for Playing with my emotions
Ria172 chapter 2 . 2/6
Overall, the story keeps it interesting; but there are inconsistencies that take me out of the story: besides the minor grammatical errors you have conflicting information e.g. when he is laying on the bed shirtless and the next paragraph you describe his shirt being taken off... Perhaps have someone else proof read before you publish? It can make the editing process easier
xkeepitupx chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
ok that was really cute
Alexis D chapter 4 . 5/31/2014
Wow girl awesome story! I love the romance, and how it's funny in some parts! Keep it up I absolutely love these stories. :) ;) :p :3 8-)
BrilliantPurple chapter 4 . 4/30/2014
like all your other ones I've read, great story! *clap* *clap* looking forward to any others you may write :D
Guest chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
ok and thanks for not being descriptive I appreciate that
Jajajajajajaja chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
Man, its sad when in reality a guy would never kiss you after you give him a blowjob, whether or not he cums in your mouth.
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Web2theweb1 chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
love it/ make the next chapter and email me it
Sarah Montes chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
Omg! You are so flipping nasty, girl. My nose is bleeding.
bubble chi chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
This is was the first fanfic I ever read and I was going threw some of the fiolee fanfics and I came across this this is the fic that got me hooked in fiolee and this site in genaral love you your such a great author
MnMsRoK chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
:) so cute!
ilovemarshall chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
theres no meaning to this story but sex. its boring
Shadamyisthebestlol chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Oh wow
Jacklynmuffin chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
THIS IS NOT FIONNAS PERSONALITY N STUFF DIS IS GOOD BUT MAKE HER MORE FIONNA K?
rainbowdashie45 chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
...ummmm derp,i guess
rainbowdashie45 chapter 2 . 6/13/2013
O.o still...awsome..too much detaill
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