Reviews for Jurassic Park: Chaos Theory
Camarasaur8 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I'm not completely up-to-date with the chapters at present, but so far, the story is excellent! Your writing style reminds me of Michael Crichton's in a few ways, as do your ideas and general characterisation. Also, the dinosaurs-on-the-mainland idea so far feels very realistic in terms of the sheer scope of the events-rather than being too similar say, the Rex attack on San Diego in The Lost World, which has often been criticised for being too 'heavy-handed', sublety and building of tension have been used instead, and also address unresolved plot points from the novels. Chapter Nine, "Levine" in particular is very well-written because of how grounded and believable your characterisation of Dr. Richard Levine is. He still has the impetuous, borderline-obsessional streak displayed in TLW, but he also appears to have more mature, even jaded traits that the character is not often associated with (his exasperation with having to run the doll company, and not feeling like he's being taken seriously by people). Instead of going for the easy option and simply exaggerating Levine's most distinctive and famous characteristics, as many fanfic writers basing their story on all kinds of franchises probably often do, it feels like you have added plenty of depth and realism to your portrayal of the character. The same goes for Baxter (a great character if you ask me) and Guitirrez. So yeah, keep writing (and I'll certainly be reading more in the coming weeks!) and keep up the awesome work! Really feels like a real JP novel.
Crimson Clockwork chapter 23 . 10/3/2012
It amazes me that this story only has one review, because it deserves at least two dozen at this point. This is GREAT! I love the style you have, and especially how you worked things into the novel canon. Keep up the good work :D
fangirl 3 chapter 20 . 9/4/2012
I love this!its really good :)