|Reviews for The Pride of the Convent|
| iphis16 chapter 3 . 10/17/2010
The kiss scene didn't fit the flow of everything else. It was all subtext-subtext-subtext-kiss-subtext. I got confused XD
Still a few spelling errors.
| iphis16 chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
A few cliches hither and thither, yet it is an enjoyable style...
| iphis16 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
So many exclamation marks...
A few formatting and spelling issues here and there...
| Anna D chapter 19 . 10/15/2010
It's awesome! I love it! Funny... I've never loved an Alanna goes to convent story before...
| Colors405 chapter 7 . 5/18/2010
UMMM...on chapter 7 it said 'Jon pulled the man out back behind the house and began talking to him in a low, but only mildly threatening voice.' when it was George
| mercuryandglass chapter 19 . 4/16/2010
i'll be sure to read the sequel
| vampiremuggle chapter 19 . 2/14/2010
I love it! It is so awesome!...I ususallyl write longer reviews than this...but I am not sure what else there is to say...
Amazing story! I cannot wait to read the sequal!
vampiremuggle at gmail dot com
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 15 . 12/25/2009
"“Don’t worry. I’ll get word to you if her condition changes,” Jon assured, barely able to contain his excitement."
Is that meant to be 'Jon' or 'George'?
| Bookits chapter 13 . 9/12/2009
| Bookits chapter 6 . 9/12/2009
OH! Dearest Jon got his Alanna's famous Tough Lash! HEEHEHEHEHEHE!
| Bookits chapter 5 . 9/12/2009
George is funny!
| Bookits chapter 4 . 9/12/2009
Poor Jonny, he'll never know what hit him!
| Bookits chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
OHH! Our Dearest Jonny is falling hard!
| Bookits chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
OMGP OMGP OMGP OMGP OMGP OMGP OMGP! this is SO KOOL! i LOVE IT!
| Bookits chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
YOU GO GIRL!