Reviews for The Pride of the Convent
iphis17 chapter 5 . 10/17/2010
Uh... OK. I'm guessing this will pick up a bit.

~Mademise Morte
iphis17 chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
Is it me being prudish or are the kisses just a bit forced?

~Mademise Morte
iphis17 chapter 3 . 10/17/2010
The kiss scene didn't fit the flow of everything else. It was all subtext-subtext-subtext-kiss-subtext. I got confused XD

Still a few spelling errors.

~Mademise Morte
iphis17 chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
A few cliches hither and thither, yet it is an enjoyable style...

~Mademise Morte
iphis17 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
So many exclamation marks...

A few formatting and spelling issues here and there...

~Mademise Morte
Anna D chapter 19 . 10/15/2010
It's awesome! I love it! Funny... I've never loved an Alanna goes to convent story before...
Colors405 chapter 7 . 5/18/2010
UMMM...on chapter 7 it said 'Jon pulled the man out back behind the house and began talking to him in a low, but only mildly threatening voice.' when it was George
mercuryandglass chapter 19 . 4/16/2010
loved it!

i'll be sure to read the sequel
vampiremuggle chapter 19 . 2/14/2010
I love it! It is so awesome!...I ususallyl write longer reviews than this...but I am not sure what else there is to say...

Amazing story! I cannot wait to read the sequal!


vampiremuggle at gmail dot com
Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 15 . 12/25/2009
"“Don’t worry. I’ll get word to you if her condition changes,” Jon assured, barely able to contain his excitement."

Is that meant to be 'Jon' or 'George'?
Bookits chapter 13 . 9/12/2009
Bookits chapter 6 . 9/12/2009
OH! Dearest Jon got his Alanna's famous Tough Lash! HEEHEHEHEHEHE!
Bookits chapter 5 . 9/12/2009
George is funny!
Bookits chapter 4 . 9/12/2009
Poor Jonny, he'll never know what hit him!
Bookits chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
OHH! Our Dearest Jonny is falling hard!
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