Reviews for The Pride of the Convent
Kayti chapter 11 . 6/30/2009
Please Please Please Please don't make it A/J!
studentofwords chapter 19 . 6/9/2009
This was great! I loved it!
goldleaves chapter 19 . 5/29/2009
it is so great

i love it

-Lady Arianne Of Ambers Valley-
dancelikeyoujustdontcare chapter 19 . 3/12/2009
I love it! Please say she ends up with George, I can't stand Jonathan.
SweetlyDesolated chapter 19 . 11/27/2008
I loved this story; I havent read a single one like it! I cant wait to read the sequel!
xDarklightx chapter 19 . 11/22/2008
I really like this story and am going to read the sequel.
lacking a better name chapter 19 . 8/20/2008
good story. I liked how you stayed true to Alanna.
JUCHKO chapter 18 . 8/18/2008
This is very well done and well written. There were few errors whatsoever. It was great!

Really, the only problems I saw was that people (especially Jon) tended to jump right to kissing. Knowing the relative time that this is set in, no reputable man would have done that.

Other than that, there were only a few times when, for instance, you would say 'her' rather than 'his'. It was a little confusing.

Also, it would have been good if you could have put divider bars when you switched POVs.

Well, This was a wonderfully written story, so great job. You're a much better writer than most on here.

~JUCHKO
dorie chapter 7 . 4/19/2008
howdie!

sorry for not reviewing before, but im lazy...

anyway i love your style of writting,

and the choice of the plot.

also i like how you made it so alanna is not obsessed(**sorry if spelling is wrong-cant spell to save my life) w/ jon.

and i like that shes like a theif noble person...

time to critic you...

i got nothing...

just keep writing!

just remeber,

just keep swimming

.

hahahahaha

thats from finding nemo...

yep, my name is a nickname

- from a fish- but a supremely awsomo fish

tahtah,

dorie-supremely awsomo reviewer

hahahaha

ill just go now
Alanna-sama chapter 18 . 3/25/2008
good story
Princess of Niight chapter 2 . 1/26/2008
cool story. read hole thing and love it.
sochop14 chapter 19 . 9/20/2007
I love the ending it was very sweet keep up the great writing
sochop14 chapter 14 . 9/20/2007
Hi

I liked your ending to this chapter it wants me to keep reading wicth is a really good thing it was really hard for me to stop and write this review well keep up the great writing

cya

Carlie
Bobboky chapter 19 . 7/29/2007
very good
cutecess chapter 19 . 7/25/2007
This was really well written, and i bet the sequel will be even better!
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