|Reviews for In My Veins|
| Lovepixie19 chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
i think waht you have here is awesome and amazing! i love Fremione and read their fanfictions a lot and this one is really good and has lots of potential. i think this story could really go far! (especially if fred doesnt die) cant wait to keep reading it! please post more i need a good story like this! cant wait to see this story evolve and their relationship get heated! from the dates it looks like you havent posted for this story in a while but please do! ik u have people waiting for the next part of this amaizing story!
| Readerchick72 chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
This is really good. The characters are devloping very well. I cannot wait for the next update.
| Dreams.Written.In.The.Stars chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
This is . .Stars- though you'll know me as the guest poster, JumpingShips :D Finally got myself an account.
No! There are STILL only 4 chapters? This is horrific! The story is waaaaaay too good to go to waste! You must write more! I absolutely love the slow build-up of the Fremione relationship in this, and I can't wait to see where you're going with this story- so far, it looks like someplace exciting :D
I actually read this update like, a week after you posted it, but I've been really, really busy and didn't have time to review. And when I say busy, I mean revising for exams and applying to university. So yeah. That's probably why you're rifling through your old reviews going 'who was JumpingShips again?' :D
Keep writing, because the stuff you come out with is fabulous :)
| littlebigmisfit chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
It's only the first chapter and I can tell that this will be one of my favourite Fremione stories. Extremely well written, I love it!
| gottaloveva chapter 4 . 10/17/2012
LOVE this story! :) Please update soon! :)
| iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 4 . 10/12/2012
Just a beautiful chapter:) I loved it!:) Update soon:)
| Dimples-3 chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
I love your story, I love Fred and Ginny, and ya gotta admire Herms I would have went off on everyone, got into fights then get expelled, in her own way she's bad ass.
| NorthernLights25 chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
| computer geek chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
Deal to that Author's Note!
Your story deserves WAY more reviews! It's just so good!
| faeli chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
I'm loving the build up, it's hard to find stories where they aren't immediately pushed together and everything moves super fast. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
| 93 Diagon Alley chapter 4 . 10/9/2012
Gosh, this chapter was so excellent. I loved seeing that side of Fred, I'm so glad he helped Hermione so much. You're a brilliant writer, it's thrilling to read someone's work that is, so well-written.
| Jumping Ships chapter 3 . 10/5/2012
Yay! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw this update! I was afraid you had abandoned the story :'( I am super excited for quicker updates, because I NEED FREMIONE! This is seriously well-written, and I like how you've kept both Fred and Hermione IC- I think I've said this before, but it's hard to find well-written, IC fics for this pairing.. well, for me anyway, but I'm a little picky :)
But I've read fics where Hermione becomes some sort of prankster, or Fred secretly cares about his grades- and he might, i don't know, but JK made it seem like he only cared about getting enough qualifications to open the joke shop, and even if he DID, I don't wanna read about Hermione suddenly falling in love with him because he's supposedly academic-minded. Fred is already an intelligent character- like the twins, I guess I just don't see why this has to be proved through grades...
Anyway, my original point, before I started rambling (sorry about that!) was that I'm very pleased with your characterisation :) I can see the two of them behaving this way, and I like that you pointed out that they are opposites. I think that could be interesting to watch you build on :)
Anyway, keep writing (cuz you're awesome :D) and I'll keep reviewing!
PS- Never. Ever. EVER. Kill. Fred.
| 93 Diagon Alley chapter 3 . 10/5/2012
This is great! I love how you're writing the interactions between Fred and Hermione. Keep up the good work :)
| computer geek chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
Don't you dare kill Fred.
And update now!
| iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 3 . 10/3/2012
I'm excited for quicker updates! This story is getting good!:)