Reviews for Thunder Maidens
Pandoras-box last thing inside chapter 1 . 4/12
This is point less there is no point in using Naruto in your fiction if your basically just using his face and some of his background but not him you might as well have made an Oc
Guest chapter 22 . 11/30/2015
this story stared out ok but has quickly gone down the drain
Nightwing37 chapter 3 . 10/18/2015
GOOD, make naruto less dumb though
14demigod chapter 23 . 8/25/2015
U killed off musubi, tsukiumi and homura?! WTF!?
TheAlphaMal chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
I really like this story but I agree there are couple things that could be changed. My biggest dislike was the whole hikari pregnancy thing. I just thought it was wayyy too soon for that. Naruto is only 18 and having a kid at that age while going through the Sekirei war is a bit too much, like if she was pregnant in the epilogue it wouldn't be a problem but I just thought it was too soon. Just my opinion no flaming here
Ararararararagi Rage chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
That is totally awesome! Quick question: Will you be posting a notice here when the first chapter is out?
AJGuardian chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
Okay, bro. I'll bite.
Kyuubi16 chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
So you're only doing a half revision and keeping all the problems? Like not making sure the characters are who they say they are? This doesn't fix all the issues we had with the story. If you're going to fix something you have to fully commit or not bother at all.
gamelover41592 chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
Let me know when the new one is up I hope you don't bash Minato in this one though
Ace of Spies chapter 28 . 8/4/2015
Shame... well I'll be following the new story then.
Ace of Spies chapter 21 . 7/22/2015
This was my favorite chapter so far. So much tension so much development and so much action! Still I wanna know what dafuq happened
Ace of Spies chapter 15 . 7/22/2015
Wait...

if Minaka is Tobi then he is the biological father of Minato "his eyes have awakened" Minato is an Uchiha!
Ace of Spies chapter 13 . 7/22/2015
Here it comes! Bring on the nine! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Ace of Spies chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
Naruto's first run in with a hostile Sekirei and... for the first f*ckin time ever he doesn't obliterate them with his power! FINALLY! This story is amazing I'm faving and following!
1066wthec chapter 27 . 6/29/2015
cool
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