Reviews for Devils and Valkyries
Guest chapter 4 . 1/28/2017
I would prefer if he never knew them in the first place but OK... You handledf it really well and I hope your writer's block ends soon
Wow chapter 30 . 11/14/2016
Not a bad concept, but some of these characters are out of character particularly Dante, who I feel is too much of a hostile guy, he's usually somber/solitary jerk and only energetic in battle. Here you have solving everyones problems, and being a dick about it, which is kinda in character but still he comes off as a ungrateful douchebag who hates everyone here especially the soliders and civies who he casually jokes while their suffering. Pretty sure Lightining would have dicked punched him the second he called him babe, and basically hated him through out the story cannon wise.
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 30 . 6/7/2016
Just fair warning, for those looking for romance, don't bother. All Dante gets is a peck on the cheek and he doesn't even end up with Lightning at the end cuz they end up in separate worlds.

Talk about raising hopes and dashing them away. I don't know about the sequel, but it's a fair bet that Dante and Lightning would spend VERY little time together if I'm judging it by this one.

Also, quite repetitive. Author copy paste flash backs. While this is not directly wrong, the author does it repetitively which takes up like 30% of the total fic.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 1/1/2016
lmao, Dante really has talent for pissing of any female he meets
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 1/1/2016
to be honest, i care nothing for Virgil or Nero...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 1/1/2016
argh, why must you bring Virgil into this?
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 1/1/2016
hmm, i gotta admit i am liking this
Axcel chapter 12 . 3/31/2015
Common sense should have told the populace at large that, since it takes a day to go from where the news said Dante was located to Eden, yet the murder happened four hours before the report, then obviously he couldn't be guilty. At least, not in person, which the method used to kill Sanctus would have required.
Axcel chapter 9 . 3/31/2015
I like the reaction of their military. Flat out stating that they stand no chance against Dante. Hah! I'd hate to be them, especially when they know they're screwed.
Axcel chapter 8 . 3/31/2015
Vergil should have read Naruto. Then he'd know how to have the power to kill Mundus.
Cosmic Guardian chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
I didn't even know a out this ship till someone reviewed a story of mine and had a picture of these two on his profile. This is so far out there I have to see more.
Blazedragon94 chapter 30 . 7/8/2014
Hohoho. So next is Nero turn huh? Nice!
Blazedragon94 chapter 23 . 7/8/2014
Well the man record is still propose to a mop so we good.
Blazedragon94 chapter 22 . 7/8/2014
...Wow...You actually give a high level damaged Devil Arms to a fourteen years old...awesome...XD
Blazedragon94 chapter 21 . 7/8/2014
So now is Dante needing to be rescue huh? (Snicker) If this happen in canon none of the character knw him going to let it rest. Especially Nero or Trish...or everyone else who he badmouthed...which basically everyone he meet the first time...
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