Reviews for Slender Adventure
Obliviscere chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Great depiction of the game, I absolutely loved it. The pacing was really good for a story that could have involved a lot more boring moments while the character ran. You could have added a bit more suspense, but I feel that the descriptions of Slender Man was sufficient. The only stark problem I have with this is the fact that it's written in past tense and the narrator dies. In a situation like that, not only does writing in present tense create a more suspenseful atmosphere, but it makes sense if the person dies at the end.
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
holy crap that was well written