This is very good! You are amazing! Thank you for writing it :)

You should write a book. All of your stories have been wonderful. This one included. I like the setup by the grandparents, the background of Tiren and their relationship growing pains.

That was so good but I want more!

I can see from the 6th chapter that everyone wanted more. Good job fellow reviewers!

That was HAUWT! Dayum I barley breathed during that chapter

Oh man I didn't see that coming! He thinks he will die soon when his time comes! How sad. :( but u are going to make it right. Right!?

Ahhhh hhhhaaa Romulan? Intriguing

I really enjoyed this however I wish I had a better description if Tilla. What does she look like?

This story was great but thereshould be more .

Interesting issue you're adressing here, please write more!

Wow, that was all quite a whirlwind! I couldn't stop reading until now!

I'm happy to see you've decided to write on!

I feel so sorry for the poor guy! And I'm worried what that decision he's thinking about is exactly...

Gosh, half a Romulan! I thought the guy had a lot of initiative for a Vulcan... Things are getting interesting!

And I love the way he talks!

Promising beginning! You've created very interesting characters and I enjoyed reading about their backrounds!

Do I sense a love story coming between Tila and Tiren...?

Yay :)

I like when your stories update!

I really like this, a typical scenario I suppose of newlyweds (lol, I never realized how funny that word is...) and it, I dunno, works very well :)

Will there be more? *pleady eyes*